Hey, I am alright thank you, how are you?
You have seen TBS six times, I am glad they blew you away because I am going to see them in July and I can not wait. I am really very excited, it'll be the first time I see them play, even better it is in a reasonably small venue, which I know and prefer!
I definitely agree Matt Fazzi has brought them right up to date, the new album is amazing. I have had it stuck on repeat since I bought it. :)
I would love to go to Sonisphere myself, and trust me if I had the spare cash I would be. I think you are right though, this year will be one of the best for good rock music, there are a lot of new albums coming out that I'm really looking forward to. Also new albums bring about the likelihood of new tours, which is always good news!
That would be great, I have all three myspace, facebook and twitter, so send away if you don't mind. I'd love to look at more of your work.
I hope you enjoyed what you read, and thank you very much. I will have a little nosey at your stories too, I suspect I am in for some good reads.
ahh thank you so much :)
and of course i shall have a read through your stories.
not tonight, because my head is all over the place with things and tiredness doesnt help my short concentration, but tomorrow defoo
xx
Hi, thanks for the add :).
And thank you for the lovely comment you sent with it.
Just have to say your photos are nothing short of amazing especially the sunset, same goes for your drawing of Gerard. You have some serious talent!
xox
Well hello there, m'lady! Thankee for the add, and it's luvly to meet you! Your picture is great--LOVE your hair! And your picture of Gee is just breathtaking. What a talent you have!
I can't wait to read your stories, and thanks so much for stopping by the dungeon! XD
Good to hear from you as always, darling. Things have been hectic here, but mibba is one of my favorite escapes. Hope you like my new story--I have loads in store for my two young Warped bands.
Thanks! I'm glad you like it. And yeah, the first few chapters are kinda bad for grammar... I have it updated on my computer, just haven't had the energy to fix it on there. And underworld is awesome! Thanks again.
Well, i only just read the comments you left on my story. I knew there was something i needed to do! XP i'm a new zealander, raised and born, but i write like i would speak/relay the story i'm telling. My grandmother and father are both English so, i sort of speak like they do. t rubbed off on me. So, that's proberly why i write as if i were English. Thanks about the grammer, i have to make up for the fact that 'spellcheck' does all my spelling somehow! i'll be sure to tell you if i do do a sequal. I proberly will, i have an idea already.
i've written another werewolf story, 'bloodly she-wolf'. Give it a look. it's only a one-shot. The strange thing is i love to write about vampires more, but i just haven't written any really good ones recently. Hm, got to fix that.
hey, thanks for reading Hunters. I really don't like the name, but i can't think of a better one. XP i like your pastel, i knew it was him. ^^ i'm also very envious of you. You got to meet My Chemical Romance. *pouts* i saw them live when they came to NZ though, it was soooo great. I agree that that cathedral picture is just amazing. I'll read your stories very soon. Once i'm done writing this. ^^
Okay, you wanted me to take a look at one of your stories. And I did. =D
Here's what I thought.
I like the idea of [i]Her Favorite Place Was Always The Beach[/i], but some of the dialogue was questionable to me. You had exclamation points at the end of certain sentences that I didn't really think needed them. Simon was either excited or yelling because of “!”. But maybe that's what you wanted. It just didn't really fit with the mood to me. Just a calm conversation would've been nice with a simple “.” at the end.
If it was developed a little more, because it started with her sister and ended with her husband. Maybe if it began with the meeting of her husband and ended with the similar words being said like you had, it would be a more effective short story. I don’t know if that makes sense or not.
Overall I liked it, and I don't want you to think I’m being judgmental or that I’m criticizing your writing, because you asked for my opinion.
Thank you, for the comment and friend request.
And No, it's not from my own experience.
I've never lost anyone that's meant the world to me.
And I hope I never do.
You have seen TBS six times, I am glad they blew you away because I am going to see them in July and I can not wait. I am really very excited, it'll be the first time I see them play, even better it is in a reasonably small venue, which I know and prefer!
I definitely agree Matt Fazzi has brought them right up to date, the new album is amazing. I have had it stuck on repeat since I bought it. :)
I would love to go to Sonisphere myself, and trust me if I had the spare cash I would be. I think you are right though, this year will be one of the best for good rock music, there are a lot of new albums coming out that I'm really looking forward to. Also new albums bring about the likelihood of new tours, which is always good news!
That would be great, I have all three myspace, facebook and twitter, so send away if you don't mind. I'd love to look at more of your work.
I hope you enjoyed what you read, and thank you very much. I will have a little nosey at your stories too, I suspect I am in for some good reads.
Talk soon.
xox