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  • Frank Falupa

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    Of course. Alone, such laudable activities would be exhaustive. It isn't necessary to comment on all poems, I just enjoy knowing someone out there has found something beautiful in something I wrote. But yes, I will definitely help you in finding poets on Mibba who deserve to be recognized. Folks like you and me :)
    December 26th, 2010 at 09:39am
  • Frank Falupa

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    And likewise I will comment on all the poems you write. Hopefully, I will be able to critique your poems with justice as you have so clearly done with mine. You remind me of a friend I never knew and I respect you for that. Oh and I dont mind the brutality. Rather, I'm glad to find someone who had taken the time out of their day to comment on a poem that could have died in the Mibba graveyard. You are an immensely amazing person for doing so.
    December 26th, 2010 at 09:24am
  • Frank Falupa

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    Thank you so much for your comments on my poem "I like the infinite scope of dreaming." Yes, my point was to be blunt. I don't care how much you dream, unless you start doing something-dreaming will never be enough.

    Oh wow. This really makes my day. Poets strive to influence at least one person in their career, and its always a compliment

    Oh, how I appreciate you!
    December 26th, 2010 at 08:16am
  • LAjunkie

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    I would write one with you. The length of the story doesn't matter to me, so long as we actually produce something worth reading. And I completely understand about time restraints after the holidays, I'm going to be in that boat as well.
    December 26th, 2010 at 01:55am
  • Solitariat

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    Hey thanks, mate. However long-winded, they're all nice insights, and help me progress..
    December 26th, 2010 at 12:11am
  • ajgonemad

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    thank you:) i do write alot. most of my poems are just off the top of my head though.
    December 25th, 2010 at 08:13am
  • ajgonemad

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    thanks for the poem comment. i try to make people see a little piece of me.
    December 25th, 2010 at 07:41am
  • Eimie

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    thank you for the comment on my poem.
    December 25th, 2010 at 04:35am
  • sam alex

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    thanks for the poem comment and yes its based on a true story. like i siad this poem means alot to me.
    December 24th, 2010 at 10:30pm
  • LAjunkie

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    Ahh, well it's much appreciated. I'm happy you've found my works to your liking.

    =)
    December 24th, 2010 at 07:42am
  • Apostle

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    Hey, thanks for the comments. Always nice to see that someone likes my poems. =]

    As for your question, yes it was sarcastic. I've never quite understood people's reasoning behind being unique and then failing by becoming just another stereotype. I mean i know that personally my stereotype is goth but i don't goal myself on looking like that waking up in the morning makes me depressed or wearing all that make-up. Not that i have anything against people in make-up but just personally i wouldn't see the point hehe.

    As for the other question, i have written one poem with no rhyming scheme but that was just when i was trying a different style. Personally i enjoy writing in rhymes, gives thing rhythmn and keeps a beat. Though the only reason that 'I Dream, I Dream' has a rhyming scheme is because when i wrote it i actually started with the last three lines, something that came to me when i woke up one morning.

    As i said though, thanks for reading and commenting. =]
    December 24th, 2010 at 02:30am
  • Dormouse

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    Thanks for the kindhearted comment on my story! =) No, I haven't read Screwtape Letters, but I've heard about it a couple of times... I suppose I'm not too much a success at being a Lewis fan xD Thanks for the suggestion though, I will definitely go check it out when all my midterms are over (oh god)~
    October 23rd, 2010 at 05:04pm