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that's better than him just lying

how long ahve you had it done?

sweet, ill try to sit down an accually read it

oh, then that is all yew need! send me a copy or link or whatever!

well, i took a guess, if you dont explain their origion it wont be certain

well, i think way out there, so i can connect thigns most people wouldnt even know had a relationship, i would somehow explain it with the story though

that is pretty cool, like two spirits, one chose to live as a wolf in the physical world, the other chose to be the wind

thank you :)
i have an idea, i'm just going to post the link to that story on my other story
and people would probably read it more because my other story is more popular.

hmm, that sounds cool, i like the wolf's name

it's not fun:(

that sounds really cool, do they havce names?

i, am disapointed without As....im disapointed at the moment...

what's the play called?

yeah, i know what ya mean, and grade wise, i made stupid mistakes and theyre the reasons why i dont have amazing grades...lamenes

that's great! good luck

hmm, i see, weirdzies

very nice, that would be a problem, unless yew can edit stuff out

sweet! that sounds really cool!

in your situation, just make sure it is the best it can be

hmm, ours is more clique orientated...and i take pride in mine...outcast:)

i thought we were suppost to write a peom(turns out it was an essay...) and i ended up with a peom, i just posted it

yikes, that sounds miserable, im not sure i could do that...
and play?

hey, thought up important advice, for a song, however cliche this will sound, either in your heart, soul, mind, or any other depth you know, there is the song set in stone, and you need to feel where it should go, and what falls into place, so when youre writing, and youve started, know the feeling of how it seems like there is a perfect fit for the next line, there is always a perfect way to say something

good with words? and it's mostly the scene kids and whatnot that arr like that...and the other people...im on nothing, im completely sane with my mind and where i stand

my best work(prolly affection, lulliby, electric chair, and broken windows, i didnt use rhyming dictionaries, i usually look up rhymes to save time and thought, but my best doesnt require that, AND, along with theme, and inspiration, is VIVID PICTURE!!

most of them arr concept or fiction, so no, it would be hard to show people at my school, like randomly in general, but other than that, i just worry bout plagerism

but they...keep me alive...

i do...and i find that i suck and hate my voice, ive already had many conversations about fame involving it...i want to be in a band so fucking bad, but the people here arr dumbasses and druggies, and not many of them...go me...

yeah, i meditate on concepts and what not, usually theyre just things that i dwell on, usually they start with a little line, like, i remember the night i started lulliby(ILOVETHATSONG) it is somehting im suppost to love, cuz it's "something held dearly" and the starting phrase was "like last december, when we stood in the embers, *somethingsomethingsomething* remember

that song was a struggle to write, i have a ton of failed lines for that song...

have you read them all? and inspiration/theme is the most important part, black and white is a great example on how important they arr

well, just let the song play out in your head, and i have three other songs on this website, i could give advise, ive contemplated basic and advanced writing, including and excluding songs, so anytime