Your welcome =) I'm really enjoying and of course I'm going to be reading it. It's totally different from what I've read on Mibba! Harry's always been my favourite Prince from the two =)
from what i read, there was nothing wrong with your writing. it was smoothly written, plus i like the whole theme/idea of it, so you'll be recieving good feedback :D
Hey, i'm Nadia :) could you please check out my story "For the Love of Him"? i would really appreciate the feedback :) i promise i'll do the same for you<3