Same here.
I just murdered 20 or so cookies. They're all discombobulated.
I think I put too much sugar in them. Plus, they're all stuck to the pan. That's gonna be fun to get off. >.<
Haha, I think it might make it better if you're addicted to caffeinne, but I have no idea. I'm making cookies! I put them in the oven and set the timer, but when the timer went off, I hadn't even turned on the stove...
I'm so used to Quizilla...that's why I'm so hesitant.
People hardly ever say anything on there and it
brings down your mood,and you kind of just stop bothering
after awhile.
If you look at the cover of the Little Mermaid, one of the towers in the castle is shaped like a dick. There are actually a lt of sexual innuendos in Disney movies, it's kinda funny.
-hugs you back-
It's okay, it is really a good good good story. My jar almost dropped because I couldn't believe I could read something like that on mibba.
About the title, dunno. I've just seen a small bit of the story. Think how you could summarize the whole plot line in one word or think about a certain name/place/thing/phrase that is particularly noteworthy for your story.Other than that dunno, just don't put a line from a song.
I read your story and...
Oh.my.God.
It's probably the best thing I've read on mibba in ages. I don't think you should change anything, just maybe make it a little longer. Or is this just a prologue ?
Get a summary and most important get titles for your story and for your chapter.
But the story is just lovely, I'm even subscribing.
Waaaaaay too much sugar. >.<