Crash Rakashe / Comments

Hey, hella late reply but thank you for commenting on my story!

There must be a glitch, but I don't understand how it would be just your account and not anyone else's.

And your welcome :) I can't wait for an update!

with that background, you just may enjoy the story*giggles*
in school, mainly, where we speak british English.
Most films and the like, is American.
Just that I guess it only got interesting after school.
I have a few good books, that just wasn't available in any but original English.
Guess that's the best, anyway. no loss to translation.

On the comments, it's good to pick up a few tricks on how to work, the rest is up to personal style.
Sometimes it may help to read the comments attatched, to give a few hints.
Translation, yeah, that's a problem too.
I guess that's a great divide, since these 2 do spell things rather differently.
Not to mention, choosing entirely different words*giggles*
In part, I guess it's a matter of perspection, and personallity.
British english can be on the 'Stuckup" side, whereas the American get on the Rude and vulgar side.
In my story, I try to make the most of these differences. Treating them as separate languages entirely.
You understand all the dialects, but can see differences.
I use them to separate people and locations, so that you see when the individual is from a specific place.

I rather wait for a while, then get a rash comment.
typos is a detail the swap is great for, htough most people jus point out that they're there, which's not realy helpful.
I know some of my comments may not have been the best.
some stories are very hard to comment on.
Though I try to leavce as many hints and suggestions I can come up with.
Together with a few feelings of hhow the story came out, as I read it.
Details like the vocabulary are relativcely easy to put out, since I can't avoid the words.
how things hold together is another fairly easy.
I like to find a few details I can quote as part of the comment, preferable, details that's not too obvious.
If I had to actually read the text, to find a few small details, you know I red it.

As you said, there are no excuses for typos*giggles* yet, we always do make a few on occasion.

Sometimes, I can't point out how exactly to correct what I find, thus leave a more questioning remark.
besides, it's suggestions and hints, for you to make your best out of.

Glad I could help out, even if it's a limited fashion.

I would suggests checking the members lol. They usually have a list of editors now:) And yes I know! I have done the swap thing mutiple times and it has given me a lot of people who don't like fiction books. O.o

Hahahaha, I wish I had the balls to say that but I just tried to be as nice as I could manage.

I wish she'd just offered some more constructive criticism, over than just plain criticism, haha.

i miss talking to you too!!!
thank. it was the first poem i wrote and
i was done with the old name because
it was about my ex and i am SOOOOOO
done with his stupid ass haha
So how have you been?

I know!!! How are you?
anything eciting happening.
i'm sick of school.
or maybe it's the people in school...
anyway, wht u been up to?

yeah, omegle makes me laugh :P

i'm glad u'll be on mibba more.
i miss u.
my ex still sucks and he's appearing everywhere i go
it's hard to get over so1 who is always there =(

i've been better since friday. i got to see one of my closest friends and he made me feel better than i have in so long.
have you been ok?
i notice you haven't been on =(

I cant wait until you post them =)
well i can i just dont want to haha
sorry u havent found so1

that's okay.
school is kicking my ass as well.
mostly spanish and trig.
are u going to post more poems?
so i'm guessing you havent found so1 yet?

also thanx for the poem comment.

not much. i want to be back with my ex. REALLY bad. even though he's a REALLY big douche. i've writen more poems and senior yr is already kicking my ass haha. wht u been up to?

i hope things stay good for you. i'm not bad but i'm not great. i'm just meh. i hope things will change.

i dislike when life is boring but i dnt like drama so i'm sorta conflicted. so things are fine?

what's been going on?

no problem. i like ur poetry. =)