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  • Rose

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    heya.
    January 17th, 2008 at 03:18am
  • Laceration Gravity

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    God MISSHAAAAAAA UPDATE!!!!!!!!!

    *sigh* Im in some crappy class which is to do with computers and want to read something!!!!!!!!!

    Donkey says hi...

    I want pie...

    Lalalalalalalalalalielielie,

    Goodbye :D

    Omg im awesome....i...
    January 16th, 2008 at 01:14pm
  • Lightning Zap

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    It's no problem. Sorry I kinda had to abruptly leave last night - I had my mother and my sister in the room trying to look over my shoulder.

    I'd actually already started to read your story before they came in the room too and I liked it.. I got half way through chapter 3 when they came in :P

    Ah boysex isn't that bad to write. I sometimes feel awkward writing it and I often take a lot of breaks in between when I'm writing a boysex chapter. I started writing boysex by reading other peoples' boysex chapters and using the terminology as well as my imagination to make boysex scenes.

    I suggest that you read Frerard one-shots, as well as sex scenes by Mindfreak before you write boysex. I found that some of the boysex wasn't descriptive, but some was. In my first ever boysex chapter, I wasn't very descriptive, but in my new story I've slowly learned to be more descriptive. It gets easier as you go.

    When I've gotten around to read the rest of your story I'll comment you :D
    December 30th, 2007 at 07:23am
  • Laceration Gravity

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    Erm... We were trying to scare you, I KNOW YOU'RE GOOD WITH STUFF LIKE THAT!!! But ya know, telling you we were watching you.... etc... not working and you told donks you were gonna write a story about sex ;) lol she was mildly worried when i told her you werent in our year

    NOT THAT IT MATTERS!!! She just sees many people as naive.

    including me. Now what the hell in bengay?!
    December 30th, 2007 at 04:40am
  • Laceration Gravity

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    Teehee I could help! And dirty minded?! You NOT dirty minded?! Come on you creeped out donkey!!!! Thats tough lol :D

    And my profile pic is of us at the London Guitar show in april lolol i found a weird pedal thingy that allowed me to make the guitar go wooooooooowooooooooowoooooooooow and sound like it was speaking!! I was amazing ;) Lol

    So hows u? I LOVE YOUR UPDATES! I may even sing...

    Not high school musical though.... Lol
    December 30th, 2007 at 01:59am
  • Laceration Gravity

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    WOOO! I found my LOTMS CD :D lol Frank just kicked gee in the balls... ouch :P anyway msn isnt letting me send you messages so i thought id tell you :D Lol carry on with your towel haired high school musical dancing :D

    IM A DIVA!!!!!!!!! *now panic! is on :D
    December 29th, 2007 at 09:10pm
  • Lightning Zap

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    It's no problem.

    And sure I'll read it, But it'll have to be tomorrow. I'm going offline now :D
    December 29th, 2007 at 06:48pm
  • Lightning Zap

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    Well thanks so much :D You made me smile :P I usually update in the morning at Sydney time (around 10:45am ish, sometimes earlier) which is usually pretty late at night in the UK. Usually my UK readers just read it when they wake up.

    And you make perfect sense to me.

    You use the [url ] and [/url ] codes (without the space) but it goes something like this (keep in mind there is no space)

    For example say it was for my story.
    I would say [ url=http://www.mibba.com/story/lightning-zap/And-If-Your-Heart-Stops-Beating] CLICK HERE [/url ] for [ url=http://member.mibba.com/11409/] My Story[/url ]

    Does that make sense?
    Basically I do the "[url= " thing and then put the link and then close it] and then I type the text I want to be in the link and then close the url bbcode "[/ url] (without the space)
    December 29th, 2007 at 06:15pm
  • Lightning Zap

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    :o Thanks so much for liking my story! :D
    I'm glad you like it so much. It's people like you who motivate me to keep writing, so thank you! :D
    December 29th, 2007 at 05:56pm
  • Callumlovesfaye.

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    HAIIII XD
    December 26th, 2007 at 09:03pm
  • CoinOperated

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    lols yep :)
    December 24th, 2007 at 12:42am
  • ialoosa

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    YAAYYY

    write mooree! ;D tis like a drug really.


    <33
    December 22nd, 2007 at 09:51pm
  • CoinOperated

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    me
    they are stuiped....but they carnt help it XD
    any way how is violence going to solve violence?
    December 18th, 2007 at 05:07am
  • k i w i

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    i cant understand uverworld, but i still love them the best and escape the fate.
    December 17th, 2007 at 03:32am
  • Jake_Jail_Break

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    yeah. what about you?
    December 17th, 2007 at 02:35am
  • CoinOperated

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    lols no idea why it does that xD

    and my leg hurts because some stuiped chavs decided to attack me and my freinds :( they kicked my leg a few times so yea its bruised all over....
    December 17th, 2007 at 02:17am
  • LoveIsTheRealFiction

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    same just being bored i guess
    December 17th, 2007 at 02:06am
  • Jake_Jail_Break

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    umm no. America
    December 16th, 2007 at 11:04pm
  • Jake_Jail_Break

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    yeah same here.
    December 16th, 2007 at 06:42am
  • k i w i

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    that's awesome! no ive never heard of them. ive really only heard about uverworld.
    December 16th, 2007 at 05:14am