It's no problem. Sorry I kinda had to abruptly leave last night - I had my mother and my sister in the room trying to look over my shoulder.
I'd actually already started to read your story before they came in the room too and I liked it.. I got half way through chapter 3 when they came in :P
Ah boysex isn't that bad to write. I sometimes feel awkward writing it and I often take a lot of breaks in between when I'm writing a boysex chapter. I started writing boysex by reading other peoples' boysex chapters and using the terminology as well as my imagination to make boysex scenes.
I suggest that you read Frerard one-shots, as well as sex scenes by Mindfreak before you write boysex. I found that some of the boysex wasn't descriptive, but some was. In my first ever boysex chapter, I wasn't very descriptive, but in my new story I've slowly learned to be more descriptive. It gets easier as you go.
When I've gotten around to read the rest of your story I'll comment you :D
Erm... We were trying to scare you, I KNOW YOU'RE GOOD WITH STUFF LIKE THAT!!! But ya know, telling you we were watching you.... etc... not working and you told donks you were gonna write a story about sex ;) lol she was mildly worried when i told her you werent in our year
NOT THAT IT MATTERS!!! She just sees many people as naive.
Teehee I could help! And dirty minded?! You NOT dirty minded?! Come on you creeped out donkey!!!! Thats tough lol :D
And my profile pic is of us at the London Guitar show in april lolol i found a weird pedal thingy that allowed me to make the guitar go wooooooooowooooooooowoooooooooow and sound like it was speaking!! I was amazing ;) Lol
So hows u? I LOVE YOUR UPDATES! I may even sing...
WOOO! I found my LOTMS CD :D lol Frank just kicked gee in the balls... ouch :P anyway msn isnt letting me send you messages so i thought id tell you :D Lol carry on with your towel haired high school musical dancing :D
Well thanks so much :D You made me smile :P I usually update in the morning at Sydney time (around 10:45am ish, sometimes earlier) which is usually pretty late at night in the UK. Usually my UK readers just read it when they wake up.
And you make perfect sense to me.
You use the [url ] and [/url ] codes (without the space) but it goes something like this (keep in mind there is no space)
For example say it was for my story.
I would say [ url=http://www.mibba.com/story/lightning-zap/And-If-Your-Heart-Stops-Beating] CLICK HERE [/url ] for [ url=http://member.mibba.com/11409/] My Story[/url ]
Does that make sense?
Basically I do the "[url= " thing and then put the link and then close it] and then I type the text I want to be in the link and then close the url bbcode "[/ url] (without the space)