Catherine, I love that name soo pretty... Except I'm more drawn to spelling it with a K, Katherine. But that's only because my name starts with a K instead of the usual C. :p So, basically I'm biased there ;) lol
You're only 14? Wow girl you've got some major talent on you... ^_^
Something that I wish I had, even though many people told me I did :\
But something I would never believe,
Anyways sorry to ramble...
I miss being young, not having to worry about boys and growing up,
Ok maybe the boys was a given but that's only because of the others around,
Anyways my point is...
Enjoy being young and not try to speed it up,
Even though we never discussed anything about age,
and right now I'm being an annoying rambling soon-to-be adult... ><
Oi I swear sometimes I just gotta stop these speedy little devils,
That I call fingers, from typing soo damned much...
*curses my fasty little fingers*
Oi! I'm the same way! lol :) I write in first person all the time! ^_^
Ya grammar is a big thing for me too,
So I'm constantly rereading what I just posted... :)
I know what a freak right? lol....
What's Cath short for? Like Catherine or Cathleen? :]
I like Cath, it's something I haven't heard. I hear Cat and stuff but Cath?
I like it and that's no BS lol ^_^
I'm doing great and you? Ya I know, I love it when I get positive feedback too...
^_^ To be honest with you,
I was being greedy when I commented your profile,
So that you would comment back,
That way I can click your username tomorrow and see if you updated lol ^_^
I know how sneaky of me right? lol
I'm Kassi by the way, I'm a positive person, I do usually give out constructive critism I can give you a link to a vamp story that I just gave some too here it is (so you can see I'm not bluffing)
But honestly, I couldn't find anything wrong with your story...
You're very on key with your grammar and spelling,
The way you do your paragraphs I believe is much how I do mine,
and you write in first person which is the stories I ONLY read and write myself. ^_^
I've lived in a few places in America, that was awesome. I've lived in London and Manchester but that was when I was really, really, young.
Uhm, my day's been okay, tbh. Yours?