Rose Red / Comments

I wouldn't mind that. XD, I can't wait to read more XD

Haha, Okay. And you are right you use the IMG thing.

Same here,
Do you need any help in posting your banner in your story? Lmfao, just wondering.

LOL it's cool. It's not like I NEVER EVER talk to you on CD. xD Oh, I'm logged off atm but when I get back on be sure to expect a message with my short story (or one-shot, whatever you want to call it).

How are things with you?

No you weren't. You were helpful for me, Thanks.

Guess who?

Yay,
Thanks!

No I don't think they are right, they are probably just jealous that you can write and they can't. You know you are going to get some positive and negative feedback. Don't let that bring you down.

8)
You updated.
I wonder, why I comment here, instead of the story.
But whateverr.

Okay, whenever you have time, you updated XD

Not really, doesn't matter to me.

That would help me a lot. I would love you dearly if you did, and give me some pointers XD, Thanks again.

:O Are you [i]kidding[/i] me?!!
I [b]loveeeeeeeeeeeee[/b] it!!
Thank you so much, I didn't think it would be as good as you made it!
*hugs* :D

I can't think of any right now, sorry I'm like half awake. lol

I think the only crit I may have about the story is that the descriptions are a little lengthy. I love the way you use a lot of description and you do it well but I think you may do a little to much in some parts, because I found myself just scanning over a few parts but then again I have horrible ADD so it may just be me. Other then that it's great. =]

I know what you mean I feel the same way about The Used. =]
For some reason Mikey has always kind of creeped me out so I like making him bad. XD
Oh yeah defiently, I think J.K would have gotten a lot more criticism about Harry Potter if it wasn't ever published.

I like Mcr okay, I used to really love them but I guess I just kind of grew out of them.
Yeah with my fandom I usually make the characters different in ways like the ones that you'd expect to be all nice I just make them a complete ass, like in one of my stories I made everybody from Mcr the bad guys and people got all pissed because my 'characterzation' off and it's so annoying.
I'm gonna add you over on Lj. =]
I totally get what you mean about the Mary Sue thing because I mean there's a lot of people like that it's completly normal. I know people like that so it's not like it's entirly wrong to have one in a story.

Yeah and I feel like I can put a lot more of myself into the story. Like almost all of the characters are based on people I know, even Holden has a lot of my personality in him.
Bandom's and OC's are like both so hard in different ways. Like with bandom it seems if you don't have the character's personality close enough to the real person people will give you so much critcism, and it's so hard, atleast for me it is, to get people to read oc's.
It's like midnight over here but I read the first chapter of your story and loved it. I have to admit when I first read the summary I groaned a bit, but once I read more I just loved it. I can't wait til I can read the rest. =]

Oh I know there's just some stories on here I almost feel emberrased to read.
It's just so different from anything I ever wrote, and it feels strange for me being able to make up my own characters and their personalities rather then with bandom it's a lot easier to get the characterazition but I'm really starting to fall in love with writing my characters more then I have any other story.