Hello! I'm not sure if you're still interested but Fragile Things is finally returned and up to chapter seventeen now. I just thought I'd let any who had showed any interest previously know in case they wanted to continue reading it. :)
Haha, I appreciate the questions a lot and answering them helps me get a better grasp on my story. Thanks for the clip, the next time I write for Fragile Things I'll definitely watch it. :) But yeah, I was ridiculously bored one and started writing nonsense, I feel so bad because half the time the comments I get people are like 'you put so much thought into this!' and I'm like...no I don't, I just write nonsense until it seems like it makes sense. But I'm legit trying hard for this piece haha. But thanks for the comments my dear. :)
Fack. I totally typed out this long comment for you in regards to the comment you left then accidentally clicked out of it. /failure.
Anyway, thank you so much for the comment you left. It meant a lot. :) I wanted to answer some of the questions you had. As for the realism and cold and what not aspect of it, I'm actually still working on it and researching what the world would be like without a sun. I'll probably take your advice and watch Sunshine if it'll give me an idea of how Earth would be like. I'm just writing out ideas and posting them on here to get feedback, I've actually read the idea to an agent and this is what he told me to do since I'm still confused and what not with trying to make it as realistic as possible.
But I really appreciate the advice you and other readers are giving because I'm certainly going to be adding it in once I get the basis of the story down.
Jonathan is just another resident of the city, I totally forgot his last name but I think I mentioned it in the third chapter and it's different than Annabelle's. They grew up together and never saw eye to eye.
Jacob and Noah will come more to light in the next few chapters.
And the reason Annabelle dragged Noah back is because she acted on impulse and panic. I'll state later why she brings him back with her because there's a key element to it. :)
Thanks for your comment on Done; it was very sweet and helpful! :) Thanks for pointing out the lack of flow with the "she is" instead of "she's." When I was writing, I originally used the contraction; but changed it because I figured it would work since the paragraph is centered around the institution, and it seemed that it would be good to use the proper formatting.
However, after your comment, I've decided to go back and change it to the contraction again. :) You're right; it does flow better. Thanks!