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Rebell (100)

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Thank you thank you thank you for your comment on The Elite, and your recs of that and Exposure. I am so glad you're enjoying them! It makes me so excited to keep writing when people tell me that they're really into my stories!

June 26th, 2014 at 08:52am

Sleepy-San (100)

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Thanks for your comment! I really appreciate it. I wrote that first chapter a long time ago, and I guess while reading through I didn't notice the choppy sentences but there was always something about it that unsettled me. I revised it and switched up sentence structures, and I think it's a lot better now, so thanks so much for your help!

June 12th, 2013 at 05:46pm

fascination. (100)

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i can't thank you enough for that awesome, awesome comment on my ATL story! it means so much that you thoguht that much of my story. thank you thank you :D!

June 12th, 2013 at 02:40am

MadisonPatricia (100)

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Thank you so much for the comment on my story! I'm struggling in a weird way with continuing that and really really love that you commented. It was just what I needed! I hope you subscribe and if you have anything you'd like to see, let me know! Hope you read the 2nd chpt!

June 12th, 2013 at 01:26am

summer.riot (100)

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Thank you for your comment on my 'Strange Story Collection' (:
I just wanted to respond to your idea of making the first description of the house as he saw it.
That is actually what I had intended to get across. Both parts are from around the same time, give or take a day or so. The man in the story is old, but he still sees himself as a young boy with a beautiful house and living family. In the second part where it describes the house as run down, this in fact what it really looks like, whereas in the first part, where it is sunny and picturesque, it is how he percieves what is around him.
I'm sorry if I didn't exactly write it well enough for that to come across that way, but I just wanted to let you know that that was was I had in mind and had intended to come across in my writing (:
Thank you again for your feedback! <3

June 21st, 2012 at 01:11am

anabel4you (100)

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July 18th, 2011 at 08:42pm