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Oh, jeez. Thanks for making that particular mental scar even worse. :P

And no, I really haven't! I mean, we've used it in classes before and in reading/writing, but, at least where I've lived, no one really used it in conversation. Then again... I have to admit that most of my friends have always been a little bit lacking in the vocabulary department, so... maybe that's why?

And I'm sorry! I really probably should have waited until I had the next chapter written to post this one, just because I should have known how overly suspenseful that cliffhanger was and all, but I just wanted it out of my face, you know? And no worries, I totally understand you're not rushing me! I promise I will work on that chapter as quickly as I can without rushing! ...Yeah, you don't want me to post a chapter I rushed through; that shit is never pretty.

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Hahah im pretty pail and used to have longer blak hair so i would have pulled off being the grunge lady xD haha sorry if i creeped ya out totally not ny intentions (well mAybe a little) that chapter just got me all wound up its all ive been thinkig about pretty much haha xD im keeping my fingers crossed abd hoping he didnt cheat on her i have a little faith in the man but he isso bi polar i wouldnt be surprised if he did.
Haha really youve never had anyone use irate normally before geeze where are you from woman lol xD i use it a lot then again i dont have a very large vocabulary as is i have problems rememberig how to use words correctly most of the time so when i actually remeber what a word means and how to use it i do haha
Gosh idk if i can wait two full days without an update haha especially when you leave it with such a powerfull cliffhanger haha but id wait if i had to xD dont want you to rush or anything
And btw your welcome (towards your thankyou aboutny comment) like i said i love commenting when the story is good and youll get more reactions like that one if you leave cliffhangers liek that more often haha

Okay, first off: HOLY CRAP! I'm a little bit creeped out right now because I totally just had an image of you crawling through my computer screen like the fucking grudge did from the tv, and I honestly do not know if I can go to sleep right now anymore. o.o

But, really! Thank you for being a sweetheart (even a slightly creepy one that I will now forever remember as the grudge lady xDD) and commenting on the latest chapter! (And bonus points for actually using the word 'irate' in a sentence! I don't think I've ever actually "heard" that used in normal conversation!)

And, I know, I was cruel and evil and a terrible person to leave the chapter with a cliffhanger like that, but I had to, I swear! It would've been wayyyyyy too long had I not cut the chapter in half, and I mean, I could have been even more evil and been all "and then she opened the door, took one look at the room, saw Zack lying on the ground without moving, and..." <--- But I thought that would've been far too mean and rather immature on my part. xD

I PROMISE I won't make you wait more than a day or two for the next update, because I know the cliffhanger is cruel! And I also promise that, if needed, Zacky will definitely get his ass handed to him.

...And I make no guarantees that that will be necessary, because I'm feeling extra evil and won't tell you whether he actually did 'cheat' on her or not. (;

Once again, though, thank you for the comment! It really did make me laugh, and it definitely has made me all the more motivated to get that update out sooner rather than later. (I didn't decide on the two-day-max limit for myself until I read your comment!) (:

Oh yeah, she definitely is blackmailing him! Or... whatever it is that that whole thing should be called. I'm not sure "hey, don't do anything to make the alpha female hate me, and that's all I'm asking in return for taking away your jaw pain every day" is actually considered blackmail. I mean, Zacky certainly sees it as such, but I'm not sure that fits the actual definition. I like to think of it as... a motivational deal. xD

LUCKY! I never got the chance to see them before he passed! But Jordinson is definitely another great drummer, you're totally right!

And you totally should not feel like you should have known all of those details about silver and whatnot! Every werewolf story has different "rules" of the werewolf world, you know? I'm sure there are some out there that have silver having a smell! I should have been clearer about what was going on, but I had a hard time being obvious because i was Brian observing and all, and he wouldn't explain to himself details he knows, you know?

And that's good, then! Like I said, that chapter was completely not comment-worthy, and I totally get why you didn't comment on it. <---- Hell, none of the chapters are chapters that I expect and/or need comments on; I view every comment I get as something uniquely special, not like a number tally I try to keep up with every year. ("But Mom! You gave me four presents last year and now I'm only getting three!?" xD) I wasn't in any way, shape, or form even slightly upset about it! I just wanted to make sure you didn't miss the chapter, like I said. (:

HAHA i totally forgot that she was blackmailing him! i was too caught up in her crazy hormones over weather she wanted a family or not,and then the moments they shared, i had COMPLETELY forgotten she was blackmailing him haha my bad!! and you most certainly did and amazing job showing off how emotional it was i almost teared up a little, i still can't believe he's gone im just so so glad i got to go to one of their concerts before he passed he was by far the greatest drummer of all time (well joey jordinson and him are my top two)!!

AHHHH and that makes more sense I didn't think he would have actually been paying attention to her to even notice that someone spiked her drink thats why i assumed he could smell it but i should have known silver doesn't spell, gosh where is my mind lately xD haha. i blame work its been a rough week and i've been so so forgetful and having major blonde moments lately lol.

and no i didn't miss that chapter I just honestly didn't know what to say or how to comment, im not good at commenting on filler chapters its like I love all of them but i struggle with what to say that doesn't sound to cheesy xD and i totally don't mind it that your asking if i read it because in some cases i have accidentally skipped a chapter somehow so your not being spoiled lol i appreciate it a lot!

Hey girl! Just dropping by to thank you for commenting on the latest chapter of What We Left Unsaid! And also to make sure that you didn't skip Chapter Nineteen by accident. It was just a little filler of a chapter, and totally not worth commenting on, but it helped smooth the transition from Eighteen to Twenty. <--- And I swear to God that is not me being a spoiled brat of an author or anything; that's just me honestly wanting to make sure you didn't miss a chapter just in case that does come back to have an important foreshadow in it or anything. ...There's no way for me to make sure you didn't miss it without sounding like a spoiled brat, though, so please do forgive me!

ANYWAYS, I really do not have words to express how glad I am to hear that you really found the latest chapter to be so emotional and touching! Seriously, given how absolutely amazing of a person the Rev was, and how much he meant to the guys and, hell, the world, it really does mean a lot to me to hear that this chapter did his memory a little bit of justice! I was struggling so much with how much to let Brian reflect upon and how emotional to let the guys get without making their feelings look cheapened or anything, and I'm glad I seemed to find a good enough balance that made it seem real and touching!

Also, I feel justified in clarifying this detail for you because it shouldn't actually spoil anything and I was too vague in my explanation, anyways: Silver doesn't have a smell. At least in this story. Zacky didn't sniff it out to know what it was, though I totally see why you came to that conclusion. He was all the way across the club when he shouted at Ava to stop her from drinking it, though, and there's no way he could have caught a smell from that distance unless it was super obvious and Brian and Ava totally noticed it too. No, Zacky saw something dropped into her drink when Ava and Brian weren't looking at it, and that's how he knew something was in it. His sniffing of the glass was a method of seeing if he could smell anything, because some drugs random guys drop into drinks actually can have smells (at least that a werewolf can pick up, at least in this story), but her drink didn't have one. Add that to the fact that he said the person moved 'too fast to be a hunter', and that leaves werewolf which points to silver. ...Does that make sense?

But yeah, he definitely ruined that little moment. Someone seems to need to, right? xDD But no, I do want to point out one more thing that may or may not mean anything to you:

Chapter Seventeen: “Just to be clear,” she started when he had finally rolled back over and looked up at her with those angry green eyes of his, “I did not do this for you. I did this to clear your fucking mind so that you don’t go and do something so incredibly stupid that gets all of our friends killed, and I did this because for some fucking reason, Kat seems to hate me but love you, so maybe this whole playing-nice thing will actually help that. So here’s the deal: you refrain from doing anything to make her hate me more, and I’ll continue to make the goddamn tea for you every morning.”

Chapter Twenty: “Yeah, well, just to be clear, it’s nothing personal; I didn’t do this for you. You’re blackmailing me, Rinaldi, or did you already forget? I can’t exactly let you die without knowing how to brew that tea, can I?”

^ Please take from that whatever you will. I just thought it was something that should be examined more closely together.

Anyways, once again: thank you so very much for the very sweet comment! (:

Haha I know how you feel about that I aint no saint myself and would probably suck at writing characters that are more on the sweet and innocent side! lol. so it says nothing bad about you at all, im more of a i dont care get out of my face kind of person and writing people who don't have that kind of attitude would probaly turn our really really weird i like writing poems from time to time and everytime i try to write a cute sweet one i end up tearing it up cause it sounds really really bad and not me at all lol.

Haha, that's very, very true! He does tend to have a bipolar character in most stories, doesn't he? xD I'd never really thought about that until you said it! But yeah, Johnny does always get to be the sweetheart... which probably explains why I'm having trouble writing him. I'm not good with the sweetheart characters. ...I wonder what that says about me, haha.

I think he would have, had it not been for the fact that the councilman was coming. He's just kicked them out of sight and told them to fight it out on their own a few times in the story, after all. xD But you're totally right. (:

haha your welcome, and brian would be hard to write he is so bi polar he can be real sweet and romantic one second then be a complete player the next, then super mellow or really douchey its hard to write characters who have emotions that are one extreme or the other lol. johnny has always been a sweetheart at least in other stories ive read with him in it so just make him be the nice one that always gets picked on and youll be good to go lol

and yeah thats true but matt should just keep his mouth shut and let them beat eachother up lol thats how they are he should be used to it i know as alpha he has to step in sometimes but otheres he should just keep his mouth shut shake his head and walk away lol..

I hear you! I'm the same way, and can usually tell exactly where a story is going (which, again, is not necessarily a really bad thing or anything). I'm glad you find these two pretty unpredictable, though! It really means a lot to hear that. (:

And, again, I hear you. He should give her the benefit of the doubt on things -- particularly things like a gigantic-ass withdrawal from a bank account -- but you've just got to remember that with her and Zacky's relationship, it's not a stretch at all to assume Ava knocked him out somehow. That's something that's happened millions of times in the past, by her and by Zacky. xD

ANYWAYS, I dropped by to thank you once again for the lovely comment you left on the latest update! It definitely made me smile! (:

I'm so glad to hear you liked Johnny's character; I've been having a hard time writing him in this story for some reason... usually I have more trouble with Brian. But yeah, she was pretty close to attacking Johnny, too! (Which made it even easier than usual for Zacky to provoke her to the point of violence...)

Haha exactly I wish more stories had characters like these too, most of them are just way to predictable and I can see whats going to happen between them within the first chapter, which I don't mind really, but its nice to finally not be able to see how its going to end with these two cause it could really go either way since they are both pretty unpredictable!!

and I totally see where matts coming from I really do its just that ava's been getting blamed for just about everything and its not fair, matt has poor timing he never sees the full story and jumps to the wrong conclusions he needs to give her the benefit of the doubt!

Oh, God! If I had paper bills... Things would never be paid. I would lose them, forget to check the mailbox, and probably accidentally throw some away because they didn't look like fun letters. :3

Wow! That would definitely be tough! I suddenly feel lucky to not have too common of a name!

Aww! xD Yeah, she has been referring to him as her mate, and they totally both need to just let it happen! I'm so glad you like them so much! They're probably my favorite characters I've ever written... I totally go back and reread the story and sometimes expect new stuff to appear. And then I realize that I'm an idiot, because I'm the writer. xD

It's a stressful day for Matt! Plus his mate was just in heat; he's allowed to be a little overbearing! xD but you're right. I know it totally seems like he's being unfair, but he really does tend to stay impartial and not interfere at all. It's just when her brother fucked everything up and when he walks into a room and sees her holding Zackys unconscious body.... I mean, what would you have thought?

exactly the internet is how we manage all of our bills and everything too!! its just way more convenient and paper bills are too easy to misplace!!

haha throughout highschool i knew at least 5 different Heathers most of which I shared class's with so it got to be very confusing and annoying! I mean If it wasn't so common at least around here it wouldn't be so bad haha.

and of course I noticed the moments I re-read them at least twice!! was super super cute!! she just needs to let it happen she knows she wants to I mean she's even been referring to him as her mate instead of by his name! and thats a big deal at least to me!! he just needs to man up and be like this is how its going to be woman! lol! gosh absolutely in LOVE with these two and this story, may just have to re read it in between chapters xD

and yeah well matt just needs to calm down a little and stop overreacting and maybe yell at zacky more than ava cause she's not the one who starts it all the time zackys attitude isn't getting much better and he's getting away scotch free yet ava is getting yelled at like she's the only one who should know better just sayin! lol.

exactly the internet is how we manage all of our bills and everything too!! its just way more convenient and paper bills are too easy to misplace!!

haha throughout highschool i knew at least 5 different Heathers most of which I shared class's with so it got to be very confusing and annoying! I mean If it wasn't so common at least around here it wouldn't be so bad haha.

and of course I noticed the moments I re-read them at least twice!! was super super cute!! she just needs to let it happen she knows she wants to I mean she's even been referring to him as her mate instead of by his name! and thats a big deal at least to me!! he just needs to man up and be like this is how its going to be woman! lol! gosh absolutely in LOVE with these two and this story, may just have to re read it in between chapters xD

and yeah well matt just needs to calm down a little and stop overreacting and maybe yell at zacky more than ava cause she's not the one who starts it all the time zackys attitude isn't getting much better and he's getting away scotch free yet ava is getting yelled at like she's the only one who should know better just sayin! lol.

Gosh, that would be tough to always have no access to Internet! I don't know how my sister hasn't set it up yet. I mean, I use it daily for both fun and all, but also for serious important stuff like bank accounts and emails and bills and whatnot. /shrug.

And thank you! I actually like the name Heather, and have only ever met two in my life, but I get what you mean. At least people spell it right most of the time, right? I hear you on just getting the bills paid -- that's what's most important! I had to waitress ridiculous amounts to get mine paid. I'm also not as much a current history fan... I'm more an anthropology fan, to be honest, but have to have a history major to cover all of the social studies aspects.

And I almost forgot why I popped over to your profile in the first place! THANK YOU SO MUCH for the sweet comment! (: it really made my day! And I'm super glad someone finally commented on the moment Zacky and Ava had -- I was starting to worry that no one noticed it at all. But yeah, yet definitely had a few moments there.... And Ava went and ruined them. xD or, at least the second one.

And yeah, Matt's being an ass about some things, but it's not as much that he thinks she would actually do anything terrible, it's just that he knows the two of them and expects there to be bickering and fighting and whatnot. They're wolves, too, so even if they didn't hate each other that'd probably be normal enough. But yeah, he was definitely harsh on her about her brother, and the whole day seems very accusatory. He wasn't really calling her disloyal though -- that was more her reaction to his statement that he couldn't ever not be loyal to his mate. It's not like he meant for her to overhear, at least.

Anyways, I'm killing my thumbs here typing on my phone, so let me just say thank you one more time and get on with it. I really really appreciated your comment, and I'm glad you enjoyed the update!

Haha it's all good I lived with my grandma at her cabin in buffalo mn for like 3 months and she didn't have wifi or internet period and I could only use the internet like once a week (drove me mad) so i'm used to waiting plus a ton of the stories I'm subscribed to just don't update frequently at all so it's no big deal..i'm trying to weasel my way into going tomorrow but i doubt the boyfriend will budge he likes to be lazy on our nights/days (we work 3rd shift) off so its hard to get him to go anywhere and i dont like going alone lol...rae i love that name! mines heather (seriously would change it if i could afford it way way to common for my liking ) I'm 23 don't go to school just work 3rd shift at walmart gets the bills paid i guess lol might go to school again in the future but i just baught a house so im still un decided lol. history is pretty awesome tho i always loved mid-evil history tho over current history tho!

Hey! Sorry for the slow responses -- I have to use my phone because apparently my sisters house doesn't have wifi yet... Which made me run right into Barnes and Noble in order to use their wifi and update the story. (Totally managed to limit myself to one book though! Woo!)

Anyways; My name's Rae, and I go to school at Colorado State University for History. (: My profile doesn't lie -- I'm nineteen. I'm totally not sure about the about me section..... I haven't found it yet either, at least. No worries on the twenty questions, though! I don't mind!

Haha I know right he rolls his eyes at me every time I go on barns n nobles, I'm trying to talk my way into going this weekend but I dont know if he will haha!!

where do you go to school (and what for) if you don't mind me asking, in fact how old are you and whats your name where are you from?? sorry if its personal i usually don't get along with people so well so I'd like to know more about ya, and if there is some sort of secreet link on mibba that has an "about me" section i have yet to discover it this site still confuses me sometimes! lol

and yeah that makes sense old money gains interest and whatnot fast! especially if you save it properly wish i was better at saving sadly I'm not hence the reason why the boyfriend controls the money xD

Haha, wow! It's probably for your own good he tries to keep you out of the stores then!! Sometimes I wish I had someone to slap me outside the head and just be all "what the hell are you doing? You have five books just like that in your dorm! Put. It. Back." xD

No worries! I have to reread my own story to make sure I get details right all the time! I'm glad I could clear it up though. (: How did the Rinaldis make their money? No, it wasn't mentioned already and it's not a plot thing I'd be giving away. It's nothing special. Just your basic old money kind of family -- wealthy families back in ancient times, maybe a connection with an emperor or two (not actually one, but a connection nonetheless), a few lordships in feudal times, major industry businessmen back when steel was essentially gold, art dealing/fencing, some smart investments and loans, interest, other things like that. It's not something I ever planned out generation by generation or anything. /shrug. It wasn't just given to them for being purebloods though -- it was earned or otherwise acquired.

Haha I am starting to build my own library with how many books I own, my boyfriend tries to keep me out of book stores as much as possible because I'll spend close to 100 every time I go in! Lol.

and ahh ohkay well that clears things up I wasn't sure if matt had turned her or not at all then again you did explain the it in the story i just now remembered (my memory can be pretty crappy most days lol)

how did they make all of their money?? can't recall if it ever explained how their family made it all or were they just givin it because they are purebloods?? or is that something to be explained further down the road in the story??

hahah yeah thats true I hear you if I wrote stories on here id like longer comments too to see what i was doing wrong or write I just wanted to be sure my social skills aren't the best half the time so I like double checking.