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  • Captain Mars

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    Oh you're not forcing it at all. I'm very interested. I like the little facts in the stories because I can be like "Hey! Gerard really did go to art school!" Nothing irks me more than when people get facts wrong. They'll put Mikey in the same grade as Gerard or they'll say Frank is six feet tall and I'm like "NOOO!" It makes me feel like the author is kind of lazy and it turns me off the story.
    July 11th, 2012 at 02:24am
  • Captain Mars

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    tehe I feel like I'm in on a dirty little secret! I'm excited now! I like that it's going slow, though. That, combined with the journal format, makes the story seem more realistic like, I feel like I can actually relate to Frank when I read it.
    July 11th, 2012 at 02:06am
  • Captain Mars

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    When Frank said he was going to Hell and then he mentioned boxes I was like, OH GOD---" Now you're making me wanna see what's up with Gerard. There's gotta be a reason why he was so weird around Frank in the beginning.
    July 11th, 2012 at 01:48am
  • Captain Mars

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    The story is called Deathclub. I just didn't label it as Mikey/Ray for some reason. I would send a link but, BBCode is not my friend. Oops
    July 9th, 2012 at 03:02am
  • hangsang.

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    Hmmm, I'm going to go out on a limb here and say that there is NO limit.
    July 8th, 2012 at 11:48pm
  • hangsang.

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    Punishment? O.O
    July 8th, 2012 at 11:21pm
  • blinded_in_chains

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    I think most of their appeal is that there's hardly anything like it out there :)

    Of course, you deserve to be told how good you are! :D

    Awesome, thanks - will go check that out later :P
    July 8th, 2012 at 11:00pm
  • blinded_in_chains

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    Oh cool, I'll check those out :) Ah, I just read that one - very dark, but I liked it (not in a creepy way, I promise!) :P Hehe, well I don't think there's any need for you to drag out your one-shots into full-length stories. They're powerful enough as single chapter stories :)

    Will do, I really like the way you write so I'd like to read something in a different vein from the rape-fics :)
    July 8th, 2012 at 09:22pm
  • blinded_in_chains

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    You're most welcome! I'm glad you don't, so many writers these days are so terrified of offending someone that you don't see their full potential in their writing, but you have no fear of that and I love it :D
    Ooo, is that fic on Mibba as well? :P
    July 8th, 2012 at 08:50pm
  • Sansa Stark

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    Oh, that's pretty cool, Mibba famous people sometimes aren't even that good writers, lol!
    July 7th, 2012 at 02:59pm
  • Sansa Stark

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    I was just wondering how you pick someone to be Mibbian of the Week :P
    July 7th, 2012 at 02:30am
  • Captain Mars

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    If you're interested, I'm starting my new story. I'm a little unsure about it since it's my first time writing something like it but, it's starting to grow on me a little.
    July 6th, 2012 at 10:03pm
  • Marilyn Manson.

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    Actually, I'd love to hear more about the novel you're writing.
    And if you don't mind, I'd love to ask you a few questions about the piece.

    To address a few other aspects of the lengthy comment (I love having something more than a "Yeahhh :P Thanksss" to read), I do the same thing with some of my characters. If I create 'someone' that I feel like is much more complex than their piece, then I go haywire and write countless more pieces with them as my puppet... though those stories usually get lost in my mind or files in my computer.

    (Please excuse my grammar, I'm sick as fuck and can't be bothered to fix everything.)
    July 5th, 2012 at 10:33pm
  • fading-and-falling

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    Thanks so much for your comment! I'll definitely keep those in consideration! (:
    July 4th, 2012 at 09:51pm
  • Captain Mars

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    Alright! Will do!:3
    July 4th, 2012 at 12:22am
  • Captain Mars

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    Yay! Yeah it's kind of hard to write a darker story without getting them together early. I'm still working on your Mikey/Ray slash btw. I've got the plot down, it's just a matter of actually writing it out.
    July 4th, 2012 at 12:18am
  • Lady of the Moon

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    Oh it's completely fine with the whole time thing. Smile Everything takes time, that's how I look at it.
    July 3rd, 2012 at 04:06pm
  • hangsang.

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    HAHAHA! Yeah, haven't contacted me since.. I don't think I got the job.
    July 2nd, 2012 at 12:51am
  • My Chemical Boner

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    Heyy :3
    July 1st, 2012 at 03:42pm
  • Captain Mars

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    You're welcome :)
    I look forward to your updates!
    June 27th, 2012 at 08:10pm