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Wow! Thank you SO much for that comment. My prof. tore that poem to pieces; it was horrible. I personally really loved that one, whether he likes it or not, it's going in my portfolio. Yeah I didn't want to put it in as a free verse, and I completely agree with you in that it's too formal to be free verse. I wrote it initially as a spoken word, I couldn't find that on the "type" thing. So I guessed for the next familiar thing there.

thank you for the poem comment. it meant alot :)

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Please reply back with my email (adiva.albaga01@yahoo.co.uk)
Hello dear,
How are you and your health which is the most important in life,my regards to your family and friends over there.
My name is Mis Adiva Albaga I was impressed to invite you for a private discussion after my random and intensive search for a trusted and honest person. I will like to demand your trust and sincerity as a friend, and a partnership from you and also know more about you, your country and culture,i will also like to seek your advice too. I think we can help each other. I do not care were my kind of friend comes from provided he/she is a decent person.Please I'm waiting eagerly to see your mail soon.i will send you my details with my pictures after you have replied to my email.(adiva.albaga01@yahoo.co.uk)
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours lovely
Adiva.

Aw thank you : ) I'm glad you like it. Anyway, I feel the same on your story. Very captivating first chapter. I've read stories that begin from school shootings before but never when someone is telling the person to kill them. Interesting way to start and I anticipate that update as well!

Well that's good. And thank you! I've been quite obsessed with him lately haha xD

Reply to your review of Malice: Thanks but my attention goes on to a newer story I just published.

You`re welcome ! :)
Thanks. :'D That`s cool~
anyways, how are you ? XD

Very. This is an conservative state. I Think theres just a lot of closed minded people in the suburbs.
I doing great though, Just glad I have a break from school. Getting ready for college and all that jazz.

Of course!! :P It's nice to know that I helped, and that you didn't take offense or anything. So many people are like "critique this" or "constructive criticism is welcome," yet when I try to point out a few things they get all pissy >.< It's frustrating.
I also saw that you commented on my story, The Beauty's In the Bones. Thank you so much! Yeah, it's quite scattered but I'm trying to fix that... And it's okay, lol. You're still pretty new and figuring out how everything works so it's all good ^.^

I love the idea of the story you put up! You should keep going with it. I don't like stories that go back and forth very much, but i'll read and subscribe to this one because I loved the idea of it!

Hi, I'm Jacklyn :) This is in response you your post in the "Introduce Yourself" section in the forums.
"The Big Picture: A moment of thought-provoking nonsense" was very interesting, and thought provoking, just as the title promises. You bring up a lot of points that people look over or don't bother to acknowledge. Construction-wise, though, watch the punctuation and sentence fragments a bit.
The summary of "Seventy-Nine Cents" is a bit scatter brained. In the first paragraph you have a terrorist jumping into the plot out of nowhere, and that can be a bit confusing for readers. The actual story, though, was pretty good. I like how you don't come out and put everything that's going on on the line. You introduce new facts at different times that take the story in a different direction.
Overall, I love your writing and think you have potential! :) But, writing aside, you can come to me anytime you need help or are just bored and wunna talk or something. I'm pretty much always online, as I have no life xD

Hi there, I'm Max.
I'm new too, but I'm fairly sure I know most of the ins and outs of this site.
If you have any questions, feel free to ask them.
Have fun here!

X. Maximillian

I have yet to meet one. Then again I live in Texas. How are you doing?

Eh, there really isnt a way..besides chatting with people and being like ohh I like that thing you wrote blah blah hey mind checking out my piece called whatever? Other than that the only way people see your work is like..it says Stories, Poems, Journals up there etc you know? Click on one and theres pages of whatever your looking for from all sorts of writers..the more recent your update the higher you are on the list..Its good for people who are looking through mibba for something to read..

Lol! Legit conversation? In the chatrooms? xD Well, I suppose its what kind of person you are really..its mostly..well in The Lobby its mostly perverted or fighting over something..you can make your own chat room..label your topic and title n such..otherwise if you want to join an un passworded room you can theres diff thngs people make like roleplay rooms, duscussion rooms about things which are rare, and rooms where people that know or dont know each other just chat and hang out..if you want to check it out at the top just click on Chat and itll stick you in the lobby.

Lol :D Oh and watch out for the chatrooms when your in there. For people named The Doctor or Emery. They live off of pissing people off and pushing them off the edge. I love our community to, to read others writing interests and such. It brings me down sometimes but mostly inspires me :)

Haha, i'm addicted to that song at the moment.
I'm mainly listening because I love Korn though. (:
I was thinking on writing a song-fic about the song. Not sure though. :x
So, what's up?

Thanks for the friend request ^^ So hows the world wide web of Mibba goin for you?

Thanks ^_^