Wow you did good on your comment it was big and detailed and I was like "dayum mine wasn't that detailed!" And yes most of the things I write in their is what I think, sort of.
thanks for the story link! i will most definitely look at it. i loved set Fire to Rain, so it's great to read another story by Daisy Mizumoto (Chao Lin, now?) :3
Thank you for the comment on Jody I like what you suggested in re wording I'll get on doing that in just a sec.
Its not quite survivors guilt its something else actually at first it was the guilt but a friend of mine read it and mentioned what he interpreted from it and I think I like what he come up with so in the sequel you'll kind of get to see that, as well as the full length of how it all happened maybe switch around who's eyes you see it from
Its okay I understand it happens sometimes :) I don't know what you was actually suppoused to read of mine but I just posted a new one called The Lie We Told Got Me Here.
So you could read that instead if you'd like its just a one shot