Sue Saloio / Comments

Haha, I wouldn't think that you could've guessed from my hint. It's too unexpected. :)
And no worries on how long it takes to read. As long as you read it lol.

Innoncence is a five chaptered story. But I'm planning a sequel for it as well.

I'm sorry they're all gone. :( Definitely didn't think they'd be taken that quickly.

OK awesome haha Sometimes I feel kinda bad for giving critism, so that makes me feel better,
Oh and remember you don't have to kill alllll the explanation points...just the unneeded ones. Just gotta find the distinction. :)
You decide whom lives and dies ;D
ugh too random/deep/unneeded? I think so..

oh and just so you know, I think it's mainly the first what ever chapters but then the lastest aren't that bad, like it gradually get's better :)..
....or I gradually got use to it. haha but I'm glad we're on the same page :)
can't wait for the next update!

ohp. I just noticed the ironic explanation point at the end...

yourwelcome...i enjoyed reading it

Um, I don't know. There's so much going on within it. Um, oh I know. The hint is broken angel. That's all I'll say. See what you come up with. :P

You're welcome. :) I don't think anyone will like her honestly. :/
Monday is my absolute favorite chapter. I love it so much!

hey!! how have you been! long time no talk

I won't baby, I promise.

I knoow your theory, and it's not completly wrong...

LY , foREVer <3

I find Brian way too adorable now. ^.^ He's going to kill me with his cuteness haha.

Haha, I'm not sure. I think it's just that I'm too preoccupied with other stories to pay much attention to it. I'll probably spend someextra time writing ahead with that story like I do with my Brian story.

I'll update it tonight. But it might be short because I'm having to rewrite it. I delteded it by accident. :/

You'll see what happens. ;) But she did end up adapting to Zacky's life. You'll see how it is. And I love Johnny too!

Thank you kindly for the friend request!! =)

Thanks for the Invite <3

I'll spend it writing and reading lol. And I'm sure it's not crappy. Besides, it shouldn't take me too long to read it. I'm a pretty fast reader.

Haha, alright then. XD
That's alright. The first story I ever wrote was complete shit. I don't have it posted on here, but reading it, I can tell how my writing improved. I'll probably read it next week. I've got a few days off for holidays, so more free time.

Then he should try being more like Johnny and he won't have to

Maybe Johnny is nice and he'll share with Matt lol