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  • perfect disaster;

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    No, it's never too late. I'm 100% sure that my grammar when I started out was bad.

    But if Spanish is your strong point, put some Spanish in there. Stick to your strong suits, and whatever it is you're not good at, work on that a little. (If you do end up putting some Spanish in the story, it might pay off to put the English translation.)
    October 17th, 2011 at 03:50am
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    Thanks! And I'm about eight chapters into your story (I think, I started reading last night and it's been one long day). It's pretty good, and the grammar mistakes aren't that bad, considering that your English isn't that great. (I know some of the rules of grammar are confussing, I don't get it sometimes either.)
    October 15th, 2011 at 03:54am
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    Thanks for the friend request :)
    October 14th, 2011 at 11:43pm
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    Thanks! I'm going to read your's now! :) [I'm a big fan of smiley faces!]
    October 14th, 2011 at 02:10am
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    Thanks for the friend request! :)
    October 14th, 2011 at 01:29am
  • ManicFame

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    one story down, 859823 more to go. lol. not quite that many lol. but still quite a few. i should really get around to updating them.
    haha thanks for whoring my stories out lol.
    October 11th, 2011 at 05:12am
  • Beautiful Mistakes;

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    I'm trying to update, I swear *-* I've been a little busy and it's difficult to write :$ BUT I am now working on it :D let's hope it's out today, 'kay?
    Love you Sue <3
    October 9th, 2011 at 05:08pm
  • Synful Shadows

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    I felt so bad for Brian when I wrote that chapter. Everyone was trying to screw him over >< Poor guy lol. But the interruptions were funny. I have trouble making Michelle a bitch because everyone seems to make her a horrible person. I like nice Michelle better :) Glad you liked the update :D
    October 8th, 2011 at 06:24pm
  • Synful Shadows

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    Well that's good to hear my Spanish isn't terrible. I'm trying to do it without Google translate out of habit from my last Spanish teacher, but it's been a while so I doubt my Spanish skills haha.
    Aw thank you! I'm so happy you like it, but I still leave thank you comments anyway haha.
    Thanks so much, I do too! :)
    October 7th, 2011 at 05:28pm
  • Synful Shadows

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    Hi, thanks for the story comment, and the correction. My Spanish is a little rusty lol. I'm glad you like the story though :) And we're still waiting for results froms my dad's test, so yeah :/ Hopefully it's nothing major.
    October 7th, 2011 at 04:53pm
  • MarriahShadz

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    Hey, thanks for the comment. :)
    I really appreciate it and I'm glad that you liked it.
    I loved Jimmy throughout the whole story and had a ton of fun writing in his parts. And I know what you mean, I miss him a lot too. :)
    Tyler, believe it or not, I did like him as a character, in the story. But, yeah, I like to add in little twists that aren't so obvious.
    You haven't been the first to suggest a Kara and Brian story, btw. ;)
    A sequel is still up in the air, not too sure if I will write one or not. Maybe.
    October 4th, 2011 at 04:42am
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    Eager reader indeed. :)
    I'm glad that you liked it.
    Personally, I love the ending.
    A number of people have told me they cried while reading it. It's what I intended, not to be mean. But I did you want you to feel Riley's pain.
    September 30th, 2011 at 09:09pm
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    Wow.
    Haha. I'm glad that you're liking it.
    And 41 chapters? Good god. That's a lot of reading.
    I hope you enjoy the rest of it. :)

    We all have our coping techniques. You shouldn't feel bad for dealing the way you did. I'm sorry about your grandma.
    September 30th, 2011 at 06:24pm
  • Synful Shadows

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    Yes, I do :) I've got 3 A7X fan fics going on right now.
    I'm fine, just a little sleepy haha.
    September 29th, 2011 at 02:28am
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    Hi :) Thanks for the friend request. How're you?
    September 29th, 2011 at 01:26am
  • ManicFame

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    i hate school and cant wait to be done and start my life. but you gotta do what you gotta do
    September 28th, 2011 at 08:19pm
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    we do the same thing here. graduate from jigh school and its straight to college. im studying to be a nurse and then hopefully a midwife. i want to work with kids for sure
    September 28th, 2011 at 06:44pm
  • ManicFame

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    yep im in school. im at a junior college now to do my pre reqs then transfering to a university
    September 28th, 2011 at 03:29pm
  • ManicFame

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    thanks!
    working at a bakery doesnt sound bad. it'd be cooler if you were like making stuff.
    do you go to school?
    i cant remeber if i asked you this already. if i did im sorry lol
    September 28th, 2011 at 02:19am
  • ManicFame

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    http://stories.mibba.com/read/422794/Permission/
    new oneshot!!!

    anyways, what do you do? for work i mean.
    September 28th, 2011 at 01:06am