Hey, no problem! Giving feedback is one of my favourite things in the world. And the commas were no biggy, just thought I'd point them out as a small reference. Good job with the story, I'm lookin' forward to the next update! :D
Thank you, (:
I really wish I could help you but I'm not all that good with trying to explain codes and stuff but if you post a journal asking for help I'm sure someone could help you. (: