I'm leaving in a few hours so I can't really critic it for you, or anything. I don't know much about Harry Potter anyway so I'd be of small help, sorry.
I'd read it when I got back, though, if you want. (:
I'm sure it'll be worth it in the end. You might even win! Just think of that, and even if you didn't you'd still have wrote something to be proud of. Think of all of the lovely Harry Potter fans your story will entertain. (:
Hello. (:
It's been really good actually. It was basically my last day of freedom (for a week, haha) so I just saw some friends and hung out. I've got to pack and stuff tomorrow and then I'm on holiday for a few days.
My favorite parts were the ones with Death. The Time of Your Life and The High Cost of Living are separate comics where she's featured very heavily as the second main character. They're excellent, and she is awesome.
Holy crap bb, that's awesome! Of course I'll help! I'm on such a high right now, I could do anything. Also, I found a new badboy!Blaine Glee fanfic that everyone should read. And since you like Glee, you probably like Blaine/Kurt, so you'll probably like this. I'll PM you the link, and you'd better send me the link to your story, darling.
It's 'season three' of So You Think You Can Write. There's a link in the summary. Oh my goodness, I'm getting chills just from this idea. I mean, I haven't been this motivated in months.
You see, we've got pictures to choose from to use as prompts, and I was struck by this one. There's this play, Rent, and one of the songs in it, Over the Moon, really fit with it. So I tweaked it for my summary, actually got a good layout for once, and started on my one shot.
I'd read it when I got back, though, if you want. (: