My sister's three years younger than me, meaning she's fifteen. She has some medication she's supposed to take in the morning and stuff, but she refuses to take it. So... she finally did but like, four hours late.
I'm Shannon. I've been okay so far. I woke up at 10:00, which was only an hour and half ago. I'm trying to get my younger sister to eat and wake up. XD
On chapter three I was trying to make it so that Madeleine only had a certain amount of knowledge about Hogwarts and some of it wasn't entirely clear for her (for example, she knew about house rivalry but wasn't quite sure who it was between). This is because before the incident at the graveyard, school had been a bit of a taboo topic as they didn't think she'd be able to go. In the few weeks running up to going to Hogwarts, her mother had of course told her more about Hogwarts, probably a bit erratically at times as she'd been very upset her daughter might not have been able to go.
I will go through the early chapters and try to convey this clearer - and a bit more likely. Thanks for pointing it out though :D
Well I can only hope to get better, from now on. I mean, I don't believe I can get much worse. But I really understand where your coming from. I will try to make my writing better. Hopefully, I will. Thank you (:
& I would like to thank you for the very nice advice you comment on my story. I'll keep that in mind. To be honest, I was planning on taking the story off of Mibba. And probably re-doing it, until people actually starting reading it. But thank you, so much.
Well, I'm a totally Jonas freak, so I'm into fan fics. And things like that. But I do write originals, which I have been doing more often. And original that I have posted is the on I suggested to you. But, it's the only won, that happens to be any good. What's so ever.
Oh wow, that really surprises me! I love it, personally. Yes, I have read some like that as well, but all in all, I do indeed love this one. & Of course! Your very welcome! I hope I help see, that your friend is truly and amazing writer! I'm looking forward to see what is next. <33
Some people just don't like cussing. No problem there. This girl though, she's meant to piss you off. She's supposed to bother you - hence her language.
If it's not your cup of tea though, I get it. Don't read if you don't want to. :)
Awh, that surprises me that she thinks that. She's really good, and beyond creative, to be honest! But at the same time, when people are really good at some things, they always deny it. Hah. (: