Thanks for the comment :)
And they're still waiting for blood test results and all that, and with rape they usually have to do a psychological exam, and a couple of other things. My cousin was sexually assaulted (not to this extent obviously) and she wasn't allowed out for five days. So I figured with given the injuries/surgery/trauma Charlotte would be in there a while longer. I'm not sure if that's correct in the USA, but my cousin was in for about four/five days
Yahh it's on private, and I just sent a request thingy.
And it'll be said by Jacob how they did. And yeah I guess that makes sense with the wolf eyes things and the vampire and all that, lol. And I'm not planning on any vampires but the Cullen's coming around again, but some major drama-rama is coming up in a couple of chapters.
Thanks for the comment/critisism, it's great compared to the usual 'good job. update soon' lol. Even though those ones are alright too.
And I went back to ch.8 and I added a bit more about the scars, but Charlotte doesn't know yet how she got them, so she just kind of notices them, but I do explain better what she is seeing. Thanks for that tip, I saw what you meant after.
And is it really like Twilight? I honestly wasn't meaning for that, or attempting that, maybe I just did it unconciously or something.
And no, that vampire won't return, Jacob will say eventually to her what went down with the guy.
Again, thanks for the tips, and comment, I really appreciated it! : )
thanks for the story comment
what i meant by 'no comments' was that while i was away for three days there were none waiting for me lol
but i'm glad the layout's alright now =]
xo