Yeah, I just really wish I had written it out. Because I have to be absolutely in "writing mode" to write, but I can be as distracted as I want just to type what I already have written.
Thanks for your input! A lot of people have been concerned with my character development, but I can assure you Sophie isn't as 2-D as she seems. I had planned on posting the next two chapters fairly quickly so that no one would think she's flat. The next parts really delve into who she is, the first was more or less just a prologue.
It's called "Lost in..." and it's basically a contest about characters getting lost in a different country.
I'm writing (er.. rewriting) a story called Lost! which is about a girl misplacing her passport while she's in France and all the friends she meets on her journey to get it back.
I'm not sure if I'm still in the contest, the whole thing kind of came to sort of a standstill. There were only three people that entered, and one dropped out yesterday morning, of all times.
Now there are only two people, including myself. I can't really rewrite at the moment though, because I'm so upset that I might just end up killing off all of the characters.
I have a feeling that the contest is going to be cancelled, but I'm going to finish the story anyway.
Thank you for your very helpful comment on "A Pack A Day". I sincerely hope you forgive my many errors, it was late and I was rushed, I hope you come back for more however, editing as I type this lol
Thank you for the story comment :) You know, I think almost everyone who's commented has also said something about loving that line. Haha. I guess it does something for the imagery.
Aw. It should up in a short awhile I think. I have to add a few things still shouldn't be to awfully long. You are such a natural pretty. You are very pretty. Whoever tells you otherways I'll knock'em out haha.
I have to finish a bit more. Then make them have this chat I have in my mind then done. I'll be sure to let you know when its up and ready to read. : ) Oh. Okay. He going be a little insane devil for sure. :P We are not starting this, dollface ha. You are very pretty.