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thanks for the advice.

Hey, thanks for commenting my poem! Well, how to write poems and stories better is... Just reveal your imagination, unleash your imagination :)

Hey Thanks for the comment on my poem "Missing You" :D If you need any writing tips feel free to add me or message me. Xoxo

hey thanks for the comment I'd love to help u out!

Thanks so much for all the wonderful comments! I'm so excited to write new poems since you guys like them!

& you should have your style is really good! :)

Thanks for the poem comment. Of course I'll give you some advice. :) but make sure to create your own unique style, it's what makes poetry beautiful. :)

I'd love to give you some advice.(: You have to make sure to use various poetry technices. They'll make it more interesting.

Hey, thnx for the poem comment. I'd love to help, since i love to do so. First, I always like to write a bout how i'm feeling, whether its love, passion, or just simple pain. Then, go into description, like 'The long-lasting love of .......' for example. Try not to go into DEEP description, for you may lose reader intereset. Just sayin. If you read some of my other poems, you may find some luck, hopefully. If you need anything, just ask.

Sure, I'll take a look. As for advice I don't know if I can give you any - every writer should have their own unique writing style. (:

Thanks for the comment! :) sure ill look at them

Hey thanx a million for the comment on my poem L.O.V.E and trust me I'm not that good, I'm mediocre at best lol I just get lucky sometimes by writing stuff down when I get really inspired, and sure I'd love to read your work and comment. You know, when I was 14, I had just started writing and didnt have a clue what I was doing for the most part but my teacher saw something in my book and convinced me to carry on and now I've got 2 poems published, one of em in a national anthology. What I'm trying to tell you with my half-hearted story is that life is a surprising turn of events and if you love writing, never quit because it might turn out that even if you didnt think your work was any good, someone else will :)

Take a piece of paper, write down you thoughts and look at them. If it doesn't seem right then cross it out and change it. Usually the messier the paper is the better the work. That's just for me though...I dunno if it'll work for you. :)
Also, don't hold your feelings back. No matter what the feeling is put it into your work. What you write doesn't have to have a meaning to someone else. Only to you. Don't appease another, focus on yourself.

The last part of what you said could go in a poem! It was inspiring.

Thank you for the comments. What I do when I write poetry, is listen to music. Every poem I write, it's inspired by what I listen to. Take the energy from what makes you write, and put it in the poem. Write whatever comes to your mind. Never throw away "useless" work. It could be a masterpiece.

EffervescentMrManson, I would love your advice!

Thanks for the advice divaboy. I usually put myself in other people's shoes because I'm not 100% comfortable with expressing my life as a whole.

I would like any advice and comments on my work!

lol...well let yur poems be real...especially if they r about u.....i get my poems from my emotions and dreams...... : D

thanks for the comment(: and sure thing :D