Hi. I saw your comment on Lexie Trainwreck's Friends Forever poem, and although you asked her, I would still be happy to help you out with writing better poetry. Accept or decline, just respond in my comments section. :)
Hey I commented on the poem, if you would like to go check it out, thats fine. And if you would like me to rewrite it here, thats fine too! :) Just lemme know on my pro.