Yes, I think it would. The poem could easily be the introduction\prolouge of the book. You've included the plot of a story inside yourpoem without even knowing: Life takes a man or woman's family away, while in the meantime, death is taunting the man or woman.
sorry this was bugging me, cruel, not curl
grammatical errors in spelling is one of my pet peevs :p
thank you so much for your kind words on my poem the deathly gallows of the heart. thank you soo much :) I have checked out some of your work and I think you are wonderful writer:) very talented : )