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  • Skyscraper

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    November 30th, 2012 at 05:05am
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    Thanks for the comment on Unstable(:

    Lol, gotta love jealous Matt(:
    October 30th, 2012 at 04:19am
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    Hello! I am here to let you know that the story darkfire_vengeance and I are writing called 'Love Isn't Always Fair' is being taken down for some minor readjustments and will be reposted soon, though it will be under the name 'Love Is War' as there are many other stories with the 'Love Isn't Always Fair' title ft. Black Veil Brides. If you'd like a comment/message from us with the new link, please let us know, we'd be more than happy to do so. Thanks- Rat Head.
    September 24th, 2012 at 10:29pm
  • MissylinaRose-Sming

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    Hey so sorry I haven't updated I just haven't been motivated to write and boy many people read it either so again no motivation lol
    But I'm working in the next chapter so hoping to have it up by maybe Friday before I go to see my bf after he gets back from the snow soo we shall see :))
    Just giving u a heads up
    August 15th, 2012 at 01:53am
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    Thank you for the comment on Welcome Home, and I would love give you some writing tips if you would still be interested, if you are, send me a PM. I don't have Internet all the time, but I will get to it ASAP.

    -Sina Cool
    August 9th, 2012 at 05:14am
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    thank you for the comment on From Difference comes Possibilities :)
    August 8th, 2012 at 12:37pm
  • Angelofhellsfire

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    Hi, I saw you like twilight fanfics and I am going around trying to promote my JacobBlackXOC fanfic. If you could check it out I would appriciate it, if not thanks anyway for taking your time to read this. :)

    http://www.mibba.com/Stories/Read/479241/From-Difference-Comes-Possibilites/
    August 7th, 2012 at 01:26am
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    glad u like it. new update today! Up in about five minutes./
    August 6th, 2012 at 06:11pm
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    Thanks so much !! <3
    August 6th, 2012 at 05:47am
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    Thank you for your comment. Alright tips. I really just read a lot of books. I mean a lot. It helps I've taken a creative writing class lol. But really just close your eyes and sit. Imagine what you want your characters to look like and then write it down. Do a rough outline first and then put more details into it. I always go back and re edit and edit some more. It's an easy way to flesh out a story more. Velvet is just the beginning. I'm still working on editing some of the chapters. I try to take comments that correct me and work it into my story and change things. Always follow others people's advice too. Even if they seem a little snarky about it, let it be, they're just trying to help in their own way. I learned that letting people criticize makes me a better writer because they're really right. Lol. If you have any other questions, don't hesitate to drop me a message. I'm usually on everyday checking this thing. lol ^^
    August 6th, 2012 at 02:46am
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    Your welcome! Mr. Green
    August 5th, 2012 at 06:38pm
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    Thank you for commenting on and recommending my work - Cheated. For advice on characters, if you're planning on writing a long story (unlike mine which was just a one-shot) with multiple characters, I'd write out traits about them beforehand.

    This is a roleplay character development template but I think if you stick to this script when writing about your characters, it'll make it much more easier for you and will let the story flow more clearly:

    http://www.roleplaygateway.com/character-development-profile-template-t32760.html

    I hope the tips help well and the link works. Thanks again for the comment and recommendation! Mr. Green
    August 5th, 2012 at 12:23pm
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    Thanks for comment on the story! :) I'm not good at giving writing advice sorry. And about the characters? Really? Thanks! I had no idea, I just normally write what I think so most of my main characters are practically the same. But I guess if you focus on one thing and continue with that, the character will have a more defined personality. If she's funny, she's always bantering, if cheeky, she's more likely to be happy, if she's serious she would rarely talk and most likely will give her honest opinion. That's all I can say. I always just go with the flow and see what happens. But as of now, I'm focusing on character development. Thanks again! I'll check out some of your stories and say opinions on the way, maybe :)
    August 5th, 2012 at 06:28am
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    Thanks you so much for the comment. Now on character development: one thing I always do is think about the character before I write. I actually thought about it for days. What kind of the character do I want them to be? I think about how they're going to act toward other characters and how it's going to effect the plot. Then I just pretty much write. I also revise about 4 or 5 times to make sure I really got the way that I want. My main characters are also based off myself so that helps as well. I ask myself, what would I do in this situation?
    August 5th, 2012 at 05:43am
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    Just wanted to give you an update :) if you don’t know I posted a sequel to “Sister of Vengeance” called "Loves Bitter Reality". Seeing how you have been so awesome with your generous commenting I want to say thank you and I hope you enjoy the sequel if you're interested :)
    August 2nd, 2012 at 06:09am
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    Thanks for your comment on My Sister's Boyfriend, love! I can't wait to post it. It should be up tomorrow :D
    July 31st, 2012 at 01:05am
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    as you know, breaking the rules of bat county is over. i went through all of the comments today, just re-reading the compliments & the opinions & everything everyone had to say about my story. i just wanted to take the time to say thank you for every comment you have ever posted. & hopefully you stick with me through breaking the pact of bat country. :)
    July 30th, 2012 at 04:50am
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    xD, thanks for the comment.
    July 23rd, 2012 at 04:47pm
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    Thank you for taking your time to read the note of my story. I'll be sure to tell you when I have another A7X story coming up. I already have two which I'm in the process of writing if you want to check them out (that's if you haven't already :3) http://www.mibba.com/Stories/Read/472685/Maybe-this-can-work/ & http://www.mibba.com/Stories/Read/468348/Unconscious-friends-and-concerts/ I hope you'll read any of my other stories and when I restart my previous one I'll make sure I send you the link! :)~HHA x
    July 23rd, 2012 at 03:15pm
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    Thanks for the comment on Poison and Wine! :)
    Mr. Green
    July 16th, 2012 at 11:46pm