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@ MarmaladeK.Gnome
You are asking me to help...wow, sure! That'll be fun. So what shall we do?

Yes the frog prince fairy tales =D i made that story as my own little prequel to them hahaha, maybe i'll make a sequel, hmm, would you be willing to help?

You're a fantastic commenter! Since little Rupe is a mouse, I really doubt he'd care about his size ;) I'm thinking of making it into a series about his daily life, in the same style.

Also, Rupe doesn't care if humans are scared, all he wants is to get away from Barney! D=

@ LettersToNormandy
For you Letters I'll let the box go. I might as well trust you after following Teal. Sigh. What a great story. This new one I found of yours is so interesting. I'm glad you explained it all. I'm hoping it'll be okay. Mostly swearing does throw me right out of stories so minimizing it is of course best. Your explanation is keeping me with the story though.

Other than the rated R thing, I wish there were more authors like you. Your writing is just so nice, and flowing, and interesting, and I just float away in it. Speaking of water, do you think Teal's apartment will be spared from the flooding occurring in Julian's? Gravity works the other way of, course, but I still wonder. Stories after all have their own plots.

I was surprised to see Gaspard Ulliel in the story! A friend of mine wrote a story about him once, http://quizilla.teennick.com/stories/6422832/1hidden-love-a-gaspard-ulliel-love-story-partie-1, and since this his mention reminds me of her. Maybe her mentions of moving to see him one day also brought that on in me. Peculiar. Not really.

I'm calmed to know that you care about ratings. I have been led to quite a few stories that I wish I never saw. They were rated wrong. My mind is still recovering. Some things should just stay in one's twisted minds.

Anyways letters I have to snoop around to see your other stories, mind telling me which ones are safe?

Actually thinking back on the content of the story I don't think I could rightly, in good mind, dull down the rating. There won't be an excessive amount of cursing, but there are touchy issues such as homophobia, a drugging, and the subject of the entire piece does center around is death. I dont use the topics just to throw them in there, they are a vital part of the plot. It's not rated R because its obscenely graphic or violent but because of some of the issues it hits on and I honestly dont think a thirteen year old should be reading about some of the (very rare mind you) situations in the story. I don't play cursing or gore or drugs just to throw them in there. They don't even occur til far later in the story anyways (not gore, I can't do gore ugh) but I'm not going to lie to you about the rating just to get you to read it. They are college students and I do not throw them into any situations ridiculous for their age. But that story isn't just about partying drugs and sex like a lot of the R stories on here are. That's not even what the plot revolves around. It's about a girl helping a boy unravel just what happened to him to bring him to the point where he is. It's about friendship and lies and heartbreak and love and family and escaping a destiny you didn't really want in the first place. So please, don't judge it just because of the rating. Stories are much more than that little box along side them with letters and numbers.

It's rated r? Oh lord. Gimme a few minutes to go back and fix it! I think I just copied most of the info/rating from the original story. There is going to be cursing just so you know. If that's a problem just tell me!

The first time I read your comment on my story, I won't lie, it kind of creeped me out. After I read it multiple times though, I realized that it wasn't that creepy at all and was actually incredibly helpful. So thank you!

Um... forgive me, but I don't really get your comment. What I think you're saying is that you don't like my story, haha.

Thanks for your comment...?

Thanks for your comment on The Bloodline Prophecy! I've seen comments you've left on other stories and they always crack me up. :)

thank you for the comment. went through a bit of a well hm not sure how to say, but it's okay now.

@ aDreamersKiss
I'm so glad it was well received. Fear not, no one was asking for secrets!

That knight meant that your title sounds interesting. It sounds related to history. But his problem was that so far no history and facts have been brought in about the beliefs of the Greeks. He never said to reveal your secrets. He wants you to reveal your facts. Your history. So that someone new, who never heard of Hades or all these things could become fascinated by different beliefs.

I'm sure when you put your skills and your details in, mixed in with your originality, they will be asking soon enough!

Dear Knights of Comment Swap,

I’m happy you have found me and graced me with your comment on The Protection of a God. I appreciate it.

Now I hear one of the Knights doesn’t like my title very much because it has nothing to do with the story? Well, that’s because there’s this thing that has yet to happen that will tie the title into the story. Now, even though you are the Knights of the Comment Swap I can’t let you know what this thing is because then it would ruin the surprise!! Who would want to ruin a surprise as amazing and awesome as what I have planned to happen in this story?!?!

I appreciate your suggestions on my imagery and sentence lengths. I’ve been experimenting with other stories, but I have yet to apply my new found skills to this story, but they will arrive at some point. Hopefully.

Thank you for being the first person (persons) to take a liking to my end sentences. I try to make them dramatic and make people want more and literally beg for the next chapter. Not that people have begged yet, but they will trust me!!

Sincerely,

aDreamersKiss

Hola.

I'm glad you're enjoying my story!

Thank you for your comment! I'm very pleased that you enjoy my story. =}

Thanks for the comment on The Doll Maker. :)
"Madame Spider"... That's a new one, creative.

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@ discoveringclouds
In the stories section your stories and mine show up in total about six times in the first ten pages. I find that very impressive.

Really :D:D:D:D thats alot but coooooool <3 very very impressive

@ discoveringclouds
In the stories section your stories and mine show up in total about six times in the first ten pages. I find that very impressive.

@ The Authoress
You insisted that we had a pact, and here it is. I'm not hiding the story from you, however much I would like to. Go on. Have a look at it.

@ discoveringclouds
that's too long :( can i get tidbits of it now and then or will i have to wait?