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I'm glad that you enjoyed the chapters! They turned out well for me being stuck for a bit. Next two chapters are going up tonight!

So I actually posted 2 chapters tonight! Ready to crash in bed now. I have a bunch more chapters that are mostly ready to go, they just need another read through and maybe small changes. So I should be posting more this week!

You're in luck! I'm in the midst of reviewing and revising the next chapter right now. Going to post it tonight. Back to work!!!

So I started writing the next scene tonight. Thanks for the offer of help but I think the ideas are finally coming. It's not the best but it's something and I can revise it tomorrow. I already had parts of it written but just trying to get it together. It's probably going to end up being shorter than the other chapters though, unless I put a few scenes together. Hopefully I can finish this tomorrow!

Even better I finished editing the next chapter so I'm posting it right now! And thanks for commenting :)

Updating tomorrow!

Thanks for your very nice comment! It really made me happy to read it. I do try to be accurate as possible on the details, I hate reading stories that aren't. If you see me get anything wrong, let me know. I did make up Giroux living in a house when I think he actually has a condo in Ottawa, but I needed the house for my story.

I tried to write some of the next scene last night but it wasn't going too well. This morning I wrote a scene further along in the story. I have a ton written that occurs further along in the story, I just need to get through the next couple chapters.

Why don't you just subscribe and then you'll know right away when a new chapter is up:) I am actually tired tonight and wasting my time other ways and I didn't write at all. So no new chapter yet, sorry. Hopefully I'll feel inspired tomorrow night or this weekend.

Almost :) Pretty much 3/4 done with the next chapter. I'm going to finish writing & editing it tomorrow afternoon and update it Friday night since I'm out of town this weekend so expect one then!

Thanks again! I love getting comments! :) I really need to chill with the smiley faces...

I'm about to post another chapter in a few minutes. A two chapter day to thank all the lovely readers who comment after every chapter! This chapter is about dinner at the Giroux's. Enjoy!

Haha i know eh:P But he's an interesting player to read about haha

Thanks for commenting! You're totally psychic because she's going to meet the team very soon! :)

I think you are jumping ahead a bit. Wait for them to at least kiss first before planning Ashley's move to Philly:) I just posted another chapter so enjoy!

You're going to have to wait a while for the hook up:) I've actually been writing a ton this weekend, but not on the next scene, so it's not finished yet. I forgot that I have something to do today, not sure if I have time to finish it later tonight or not.

I actually have some other stories if you need something to keep you going until I post again. Warning though, none of them are finished (I'm bad I know but I am trying really hard to finish this story).

Your comment was so nice to read that it inspired me to actually post the next chapter tonight instead of waiting until tomorrow! Maybe you are still up to enjoy it, if not, something to look forward to tomorrow. I'm glad that you are enjoying my story so much so far! I haven't read 50 Shades of Grey so I don't know too much about it (I have the impression it has BDSM which isn't my thing) but it's quite the compliment to be compared to a published book that has tons of readers. Thanks!

Thanks for the comment. Don't worry, I'm working on the new chapter right now!

Thanks for your comment on my story! I really appreciate it. I just posted chapter 3. I should be able to post chapter 4 this weekend.