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  • TAWheeler

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    Thank you for reading my story. I thought making the contrast between Razel and her "parents" very drastic would be funny. I'll definatly read one of your stories, or all. I love to read as much as I love to write. Thank you for your comment and I'd love to hear more and any ideas you think would be good for the story I'm always open for suggestions and helpful critisism. :)
    August 9th, 2012 at 11:14am
  • discoveringclouds

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    Weird messages began popping up, I don't know what that was, but I'm really worried!
    August 8th, 2012 at 09:06am
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    hahaha hey I think adieu's alright :P and... yeah what do you need? :P add in some soft warm bread and butter, it always makes the scene romantic
    August 8th, 2012 at 04:58am
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    @ The Authoress
    Do it! Bring it forth!
    Edit...both. :C

    Em....I'm trying to edit this train baby, but after the first remodelling I don't know what to do with the guy. Gosh, writing love stories, can I borrow your brain for a bit?
    August 8th, 2012 at 04:56am
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    @ discoveringclouds
    i almost forgot about that :P ... you mean edit adieu or angels' revenge? (why not bring all of quizzy here?) ;)
    August 8th, 2012 at 04:22am
  • discoveringclouds

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    Your new story reminds me of the world in Angel's Revenge, which by the way should definetly be flown over here. Adieu frenchie, perhaps you should swipe some editing twigs from your work, adieu.
    August 8th, 2012 at 04:20am
  • discoveringclouds

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    Does the way I speak to you on here make it weird to talk to me? I talk in flowing poetic language in my head, I'm not sure how it turns out here. I guess it's not much you can respond to in the end. Sorry.
    I'm glad you can get help from the bbcodes things. :)
    August 8th, 2012 at 02:24am
  • discoveringclouds

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    Also you may like this: http://www.mibba.com/Forums/Topic/149387/New-BBcodes/
    August 7th, 2012 at 01:03pm
  • discoveringclouds

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    Authoress although you suggested naught a thing, others have.The Train is molding. Bending metal can be heard into the future. This train is going on a different track.
    August 7th, 2012 at 01:02pm
  • yang yoseob.

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    hehe sure thing c: I'll go check 'em out now since I'm so bored cc: and I see that we entered the same contest haha good luck!
    August 6th, 2012 at 10:36pm
  • Austin Carlile;

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    Thank you for commenting on The Ghost of You! :)

    And, to answer your question about the age, it was kind of a guess on her part, judging by the alcohol/appearence. She's one of those absolutely psycho bitches, which I'll get into a lot more in the next chapter. As to the happy part, it's partly the adrenaline rush, partly the fact that she's just a psycho bitch.

    Thank you again! :)
    August 6th, 2012 at 10:14pm
  • yang yoseob.

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    thanks for your comment on Desperate for Air! ccc:
    August 6th, 2012 at 05:06am
  • I Feel Like Koda

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    Well thank you. It's not greatly appreciated. >.> xD
    August 6th, 2012 at 04:50am
  • I Feel Like Koda

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    :3
    August 6th, 2012 at 04:02am
  • I Feel Like Koda

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    x) You have made my day, madame.
    Absolutely made it.
    I love you forever now.
    August 6th, 2012 at 03:42am
  • I Feel Like Koda

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    I won't! :) I'm trying come up with the next chapter right now actually.
    So glad you like it.
    August 6th, 2012 at 01:49am
  • I Feel Like Koda

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    Thank you so much for your comment on The Doll Maker. Wow, on the first chapter. I couldn't believe it xD
    August 5th, 2012 at 11:43pm
  • paper planes;

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    Really? Because your comments on my story totally made my day! <3

    Thank you soo much for the feedback; I really appreciate it~! c:
    August 5th, 2012 at 11:26pm