It does? (The profile thing anyway) I'm...too...bored...to...check it out.... sorry xD. anyway nobody comes to my profile nowadays, except nice people like you, Haha. This is just a google image :)) i was tired of my old avatar. haven't been on here in forever....wanna talk?
thank you. and ya
i have another story
on here. it's called
Camp Boulder. and
i'm glad you liked my
one-shot as a one-shot
since that's reallly all
it could ever be. lol
Yeah, my writing skills have progessively gotten much better over time. I began Fortuitous a couple of weeks before STM:S, and that's why theres a big difference. And now that you point it out I do use alot of comma's. In my head there's alot of pauses, (see right there being a prime example) and so comma's=pauses and that's why theres more than the needed amount. I'll try and work on that :)