Hey you commented on my "propossed end to human suffering" artical ^^
You're perceptive! Honestly, you're one of the comments that most impressed, though it was not written in satire, it was in the spirt of "LOL, fuck the world"... Hysteria, I guess. It was written for an english assignment that asked us to "write a persasive essay" that was all. I procrastinated, and had one night left. I was depressed, for other reasons. I actually was well aware of the new studies on suicide and atheism, but didn't want to explain it the long way around, and I know english teachers are waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay too lazy to look at the sources. I just scraped below an A- on it.
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but yeah. anyways. thanks for being one of the more intelligent people on the internet.
hey you commented on my article?
just fyi if you didn't read my comment on it, i have an insane history teacher who has us write in his twisted format. so yes, i KNOW it's organized really, really badly. not my fault. you don't have to pound it in.
I didn't cite Wikipedia as a source(on the MSbP article), it's there as a link for more information. I thought most people would tend to either google or wiki it if they were interested in more detail, so I provided a link. There is a much more credible link underneath it, so if you didn't want the Wikipedia link, there's the Cleveland Clinic link right underneath it. All I'm saying is that those links aren't sources. They're for more information, if you want it.
Thank you for taking the time to tell me your opinion on my article.
To explain, the situation I explained, those boys in my class weren't friends. I wrote the article in a rage after coming home from school when they had been "joking" around, and then one of them "joked" that they were strangling an African American. He had to go to the hospital.
So, they say that they're "jokes," to the school and teachers, but they aren't.
To fully explain, I wrote out about two thousand words explaining all of this. Then I figured no one would read all that, so I edited it down, and I agree, it does make it seem unimpressive and jump around a lot. That is part of the rage that I described earlier.
However I hope hearing this from my perspective you understand more. I am tired of having to deal with this in my face every day and not being able to do ANYTHING about it.
I'm sorry I wasted your time with my unimpressive article. But thank you for commenting on it anyhow.
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