@ mrsmshadz Okay, I'm sorry but to me, you are. I went through and re read Reckless, the one you said and commented that on. In 15 chapters there are EIGHT or NINE eye rolls. (that's through out the entire story) Yes, there are several of those in one chapter, but not in inappropriate places. And they aren't in every chapter. And where they were located yeah they did.
As for the doctor thing, I have seen doctors roll their eyes. My Doctor does it. So do the doctors at the hospital around here. I'm not meaning to sound bitchy but you are complaining about something that isn't really an issue and isn't true. When it's made up like that, I take a little bit of offense.
I've never seen a doctor roll his eyes before. I've been around doctors enough to know that. And if you go through your stories there probably is at least 10 eye rolls per chapter lol I don't mean to sound bitchy, I just dont understand all the eye rolling.
Okay, I'm still trying to figure out the whole eye rolling thing, but I know plenty of doctors that roll their eyes at patients. It depends on the place and how stupid and ignorant the doctor is. I also don't even see the relevance the whole eye rolling thing had the last chapter, no one rolled their eyes in it. they way you say it has me thinking I've got them rolling there eyes at least ten times a chapter. I'm just trying to figure out where you are coming from.
also thanks for the comment on The Hardest Part of Letting Go.
Hey! I updated He Smells Like the Ocean, my Brian story! I apologize for the long wait between updates, and I can assure you that it won't happen again! If you still wish to read, here's the link for my story. Any comments are appreciated, as well.
I think it's because I'm unsure how people are going to react over it. I've never really gone that far in this direction in one of my stories. I always worry I guess when I do something different than what I usually do. But, from what I told one of my friends, she thinks it's a good direction.
Thanks for the comment on my story. I appreciate it.
I actually have The Vows I Make planned out, so I do know what is going to happen next, as well as how this is going to end. I know what's gonna happen next, and I'm worried about it. I don't know what that says for me, but it's the truth. Thank you for sticking with me. I was in a really bad writing rut and I'm taking full advantage of this sudden energy burst for my writing.
I'm sorry I just replied now to your comment on "No more breath inside". I've been a little down lately.. but awww I'm so happy to know that you felt like reading the one shot again :'D that's awesome really
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