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  • RobinA7X

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    Hi there I finally updated my story
    Coming Home
    Let me know how ya like it :)
    June 2nd, 2014 at 05:18am
  • Lalaster

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    Thank you.
    Just the fact that I've done some pretty bad things has been haunting me for awhile.
    You are just sweet. :)
    May 31st, 2014 at 10:18am
  • burning.

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    Hello! Just letting you know that I updated He Smells Like the Ocean. Cute Comments and feedback is appreciated!
    May 28th, 2014 at 10:06pm
  • xSweet.Afterlifex

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    @ mrsmshadz
    Okay, I'm sorry but to me, you are. I went through and re read Reckless, the one you said and commented that on. In 15 chapters there are EIGHT or NINE eye rolls. (that's through out the entire story) Yes, there are several of those in one chapter, but not in inappropriate places. And they aren't in every chapter. And where they were located yeah they did.

    As for the doctor thing, I have seen doctors roll their eyes. My Doctor does it. So do the doctors at the hospital around here. I'm not meaning to sound bitchy but you are complaining about something that isn't really an issue and isn't true. When it's made up like that, I take a little bit of offense.
    April 14th, 2014 at 03:42am
  • mrsmshadz

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    I've never seen a doctor roll his eyes before. I've been around doctors enough to know that. And if you go through your stories there probably is at least 10 eye rolls per chapter lol I don't mean to sound bitchy, I just dont understand all the eye rolling.
    April 13th, 2014 at 10:05pm
  • xSweet.Afterlifex

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    Okay, I'm still trying to figure out the whole eye rolling thing, but I know plenty of doctors that roll their eyes at patients. It depends on the place and how stupid and ignorant the doctor is. I also don't even see the relevance the whole eye rolling thing had the last chapter, no one rolled their eyes in it. they way you say it has me thinking I've got them rolling there eyes at least ten times a chapter. I'm just trying to figure out where you are coming from.

    also thanks for the comment on The Hardest Part of Letting Go.
    April 13th, 2014 at 08:15pm
  • xSweet.Afterlifex

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    Awesome. If you need the link or can't find it lemme know.
    April 10th, 2014 at 08:08pm
  • xSweet.Afterlifex

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    Thanks for the comment on No Matter What! I'm glad you loved it. The sequel is already Posted. It's called Reckless.
    April 10th, 2014 at 07:42pm
  • xSweet.Afterlifex

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    Again, your comment made me smile. I have to work on a different story now, but I promise, another update soon!
    April 6th, 2014 at 05:28am
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    I don't know if you noticed, but I updated it early today as well as the one you read last night. Hope you enjoy. Very Happy
    April 6th, 2014 at 12:07am
  • xSweet.Afterlifex

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    Awww.. YAY!!!!
    April 5th, 2014 at 10:56pm
  • xSweet.Afterlifex

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    Thanks for the comment. I love your comments. I really do.
    xoxo J
    April 5th, 2014 at 10:40pm
  • burning.

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    Hey! I updated He Smells Like the Ocean, my Brian story! I apologize for the long wait between updates, and I can assure you that it won't happen again! If you still wish to read, here's the link for my story. Any comments are appreciated, as well. Cute

    http://www.mibba.com/Stories/Read/526650/He-Smells-Like-the-Ocean/
    March 31st, 2014 at 12:25am
  • xSweet.Afterlifex

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    Well, I am so glad that I could surprise you with the way that The Vows I Make ended. I'm glad that you love the story. Thank you for the comment.
    March 26th, 2014 at 08:59pm
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    Thanks. I really appreciate that. You're awesome! I'll keep at it, and hope everyone likes it no matter what.
    March 22nd, 2014 at 05:22pm
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    I think it's because I'm unsure how people are going to react over it. I've never really gone that far in this direction in one of my stories. I always worry I guess when I do something different than what I usually do. But, from what I told one of my friends, she thinks it's a good direction.
    March 22nd, 2014 at 07:28am
  • xSweet.Afterlifex

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    Thanks for the comment on my story. I appreciate it.

    I actually have The Vows I Make planned out, so I do know what is going to happen next, as well as how this is going to end. I know what's gonna happen next, and I'm worried about it. I don't know what that says for me, but it's the truth. Thank you for sticking with me. I was in a really bad writing rut and I'm taking full advantage of this sudden energy burst for my writing.

    xoxo J
    March 22nd, 2014 at 04:48am
  • pekigirl

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    I'm sorry I just replied now to your comment on "No more breath inside". I've been a little down lately.. but awww I'm so happy to know that you felt like reading the one shot again :'D that's awesome really
    March 21st, 2014 at 03:45pm
  • Lalaster

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    Thank you for reading & commenting on my story Only You. :)
    March 7th, 2014 at 10:15pm
  • burning.

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    Hey, I'm just letting you know that I updated my story, He Smells Like the Ocean! Cute

    http://www.mibba.com/Stories/Read/526650/He-Smells-Like-the-Ocean/
    December 11th, 2013 at 11:49pm