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@ KingSquishy
Bah, I'm sure they'll be better than mine. The chapter I read of yours had a nice setup and characterization X) You know I'm right XD

Oh? Then you will be sorely disappointed! Mine are terrible. I can't write for the life in me.

@ KingSquishy
Nah, it should be fine. I'll probably end up reading through most of them, since I need something to read. Sometimes you just need someone else to see how good it is. X)

I have millions of the things. Searching for a king. Has four kings in it. Edward IV, Edward V, Richard III and Henry VII. That's one not based at all on history. Nor really is As Roses Fade they are what if's. The Yorkist Rose is quite historically based. But, I didn;t have all the knowledge I have now when I was writing that. So it sucls.

@ KingSquishy
I'll subscribed now =) and I'll read that one too

If yopu want tor ead the one thats failed? as toses fade, the first chapters are actually quite good.

Thank you :) have you subscribed?

@ KingSquishy
Cool, I'll read the next chapters too =)

I will indeed :)

@ KingSquishy
It's fine XD just let the story develop a little and you'll see

The start of this chapter is terrible... really terrible

@ KingSquishy
Nah, it's better than the stuff I write. I think it'll be really great as time goes on

Uh I think it will be terrible, Is so far!

@ KingSquishy
Yeah, I think it would be pretty interesting. I'm sure it'll turn out great =)

i saw :) thank you :) very helpful, you're right. The Earl fo Shrewws burys view would certainly be interesting.

@ KingSquishy
Ok, I wrote a comment =P

@ KingSquishy
Ok, no problem

By the way forgive the spelling mistakes, I am blind and zoometext wasn;t working properly when I wrote it. So very frustrating

Thank you :)

@ KingSquishy
Ok, ill let you know when im done =P