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Hello

Are you planning to finish Your Silver Bullets?? It's been quite a while

Hey! Haven't spoken to you in a while! xD
How are you, how's everything??

You never commented back XD

Hey! Oh my god I haven't talked in you in ages, wow. Sorry replying a month late, I usually am on FF.net now days, but I'm about to start posting an original on here :) How are you? Keeping safe I hope.

I have created your layout for the story, add me as an author so I can put it up, and we can figure out what you like and dislike about it :))) Then we can move on to the main banner for the story and so forth :)

I know what you mean!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I know! They totally distract and change the idea the reader has of how the characters look. Perhaps a faceless couple for a banner but that is about all I do for people except in the character section!

No problem, come up with a simple idea for the layout, like a type of flower, candles, ect. Something I can find easily and mold, you want to stay away from people though.

Read-a-bility goes hand in hand with visually stimulating, which I totally plan on helping with! Oh and I know I have so many classes I can hardly keep up, but I will think rather hard on what I would like to see!

( I was actually worried you would be mad how I bashed it a bit XD) I will come up with some ideas, do you mind if I think on it a bit? Maybe post some tomorrow? I need to really ponder what I as a reader would like to see XD *really getting into this!* Like I said though I would love a chapter showing the mental difference between Damien and his evil self, and the self struggle to control his feelings.

I would love to help, I think that grammatically there is a lot that needs to be done, as well as character development, and explanations.
The characters need to be more personable, they need more quirks to make them more realistic, and you need to not be afraid to make the main characters their own person and not generalized. For first person, I think you need to get more into Cassandra's mind, you need to make sure she has a connection with the reader. Description and first person are like PB&J! Using the first person format gets your reader to become that character. So the reader needs to know all of her feelings, fears, hopes, dreams, and what led to making her the person she is. I get that Cassandra is loyal, non-logical in thinking, and even brave, but it just skims over the top. She confuses me a bit, calling Damien 'Kind and loving'...
after he chains her to a wall and tries to drug her...
Damien I think needs to become more conflicted, perhaps have more POV from him, showing his disgust for what he is (I assume he holds disgust for himself because he hates when she calls him a Vampire) Show him struggling to keep control of himself, and the difference between the demonic side of him he struggles to contain. I would show how hard he works at it compared to Jayden who (from the looks of things) enjoys what he is.

I have always loved the plot and your writing, and I may sound hard but I only am because I want the story to become even greater then before! I also would love to write a few spin'offs

2 messages, XD but I just read that a certain amazing story is being rewritten, and I so want in! :))))))

I would love to help you make an amazing layout for My Annoying Vampire, some banners, and help maybe with a few ideas :) Also you know I am going to come up with an amazing character that will astound you, like I have done before (Curtis, if you remember XD)

Crap, you are so right! It has been too long! I am busy, but happy I guess, although stressing out far too much... How about you?

hey can u link to the story "'Eternal Love Starts With One Bite'". i cant find it. ty and i just started reading ur story 'my annoying vampire' and its rlly good so far :)

Hey. I'm just sending shout outs to everyone whose on my friends list on here. I'm also promoting a story I'm writing too. so if you wouldn't mind, could you maybe check out my new story? It's called the keeper of the stars ((http://stories.mibba.com/read/400595/The-Keeper-of-the-Stars/)) and It's about a werewolf and a falling star, if you're into that kinda stuff.. if not still stop by and check out my other story Reality. It's about a girl who has to decide between what she thinks is a good future, and her past.

Hey there, sorry for dropping by so randomly! Stopped by to say I posted a new journal regarding my stories I thought you should see if you’re still subscribed to them. Thanks again and have an awesome day!

Thanks, XD you defently should! on both accounts :)

I try XD oh and I actually am making a scene with my new story Our Deathly Love, I have the best fans now! :) I am editing my friend's story and she is editing mine, we are trying to get it in gear. I think you should post more, I use to love your stories, and contests, :P well when I won anyways.

trying to take Mibba by storm with new cut throat types of ideas for getting noticed. Ya know the usual, how are you doing?