Ya that part is choppy but i couldnt think of how to fix it and it still say what i want so i left it...when you say forced do you mean its all the same kinda rhyme oooor? Because thats just how i like it, when its all the same kinda
Thanks for the poem commment, I knew it wouldn't flow right because Ive never wrote a poem like that before it was just an expirament your feedback is really apperciated. Thanks so much :)
Thank you so much! And I will. Also wanted to let you know I love all your poems and think you're very talented so it means a lot to hear that from you, thank you :)
Thank you for the comment and I agree with you it didn't fit well with the poem, so I did take it off after reading it over. Thank you again for commenting on my poem.
Thanks I'm actually still posting some poems right now, just the ones that are done that I have drafted, but thank you I needed to know if I was any good
So, I got this crazy notion to send a "Hello" message to every person on my mibba friend list. So, if you are reading this, obviously you are on my friends list. So, tell me, how are you? What have you been up to? It may have been a long time since you and I had a chat....