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it could've been worse... haha. I'll probably change it again anyway.

That last update kind of blew my mind... and now I'm more confused than ever.

Can't say I blame you about college. I still have yet to enroll since I moved, but I intend on doing it soon. I wanted to get in before summer classes start, but I may have to wait until the fall.

And of course it's still good second time around. It will always be good. :)

O.O Nice guess. I have a weakness for bad guys.

No problem :) everything is perfect now that I know you're going to update eventually; I just wasn't sure if you were going to continue. But I can wait. Again, it's an awesome story!

Good luck on your college aps :)

Is your story ever going to be updated? :D Sorry that sounded rude xXD But when will you update?? :)

Awesome and yep;) Just gotta be simple me.

Thanx 4 reading my poem im glad u licked it :)

Thanks a lot for reading my poem!
I know, I do have a lot of typos when I write poems, so thanks for pointing it out! I would've never seen it. xD

yep, always I'm Ally!

Yep, it's my favorite word. :)

Interesting.

Well I've been on here reading a lot. Keeps me distracted from reality to get so caught up in the lives of the characters of others' stories. I'm turning into a mindless zombie, feeding off of a false realitiy instead of brains.

What's up with us? Neither of us are going anywhere with our stories! I know I promised you I'd get something up, but I am so uninspired by this damn thing right now that I find it nearly impossible to even think of where to go now. I am beginning to dislike my characters and no longer have any idea what to do with the next chapter to get it anywhere good. I miss your story though and it makes me feel guilty even thinking about wanting to pick your brain for the next chapter when I can't even bring myself to think about mine.

ohai,
haven't spoken to you in a while,
what's up?
-Caitlin

:) lol xD Thats ok :) I'm sure we will all wait patiently :P xD Nevertheless cant wait for the next update.. lol and have fun xDDD

Indeed it is easier said than done, but I will definitely try to write for ya buddy. =]
I wish my characters had as much fun with life as I do, or more so... maybe then I would find it more exciting to write, haha.

LOL
:)
Really ?? :P xD and I loved it! xD :)
Are you going yo update soon?

Yeah, my man's a bit of a romantic, but still a guy at the end of the day too. I'm trying to con him into writing a story with me, but I doubt it'll ever happen. As for video games, we're really into Champions right now. I love the different characters, abilities, and challenges. As I told you before, I'm a fantasy nerd so it's right up my alley. And the cheese... well, I'm not quite sure about your experiment, but what brought on this idea?

Oh no, that sounds horrid! The only guys that act like that aren't quite into girls, haha. I myself am kind of getting sick of Coty's character to be honest. I used to adore him, but I don't like overly sappy guys to begin with so I don't know why I created him like that in the first place. Maybe because that's what Evelyn needed, but I don't know. I'd like to make him more of a man, I guess, but I may be ending this story soon, so I don't know if there's a point. I will probably do a sequel either way though.

PS. In regards to your comment on my story... Coty's not a typical guy. Coty's character, in my mind, is kind of a hopeless romantic. I'm going to have Anthony be a bit more like a standard guy once he gets over his fascination with Evelyn, but Coty is probably going to remain a bit "girlier," as you put it. My man and I are the types to stay up late watching action flicks and playing video games, so I, for the most part, understand the typical male, or so I'd like to think.