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Lol! That's awesome- I'm glad that was your favourite part =]
Oh dude I knw. It's so freakin' loooong. I think I might condense some of the chapters (like the party chapters) into, like, one single longer chapter. Lol, make the stupid thing look less intimidating.
Honestly, if I were a reader, I don't know if I'd have the patience to read all of it hehe. So, I'm mucho impressed =]
(ps - Disney movies ftw! That's awesome. I don't care how old I get, I'll always love 'em. My fav is probably the Jungle Book)

Lol it's goin not bad at all. Workin' away on stories and stuff, you know.
Yaaah!! Robin Boy Virgin fan! =D What was your favourite part of the story? (ps, I have some ideas about prequels and maaaybe a sequel. so... yeah keep a look out for that =})

Hola new friend, thanks for the add! =]
lol how's it goin?

Hmmm you should find it soon xD Just saying..

Haha thanks a lot for commenting in the story! I don't know if there is going to be a sequel or not because, truthfully, I am so busy right now. I might choose to right it in the summer, but then I have to tackle the chapter plan *sighs*. You have no idea how much that sucks. Haha :P Thanks for commenting

Hii. Umm, I know this is really lame and bad and cheesy and all, but I was wondering if you'd, by any chance, read this original slash? D:

http://stories.mibba.com/read/200673/And-I-Will-Try-to-Fix-You/

It's written by me and falling.frankie. It'd be amazing if you checked it out... Basically I'm really nervous about my first co-written story, so yeah... >.<

Sorry to bother you! >.<

Thank youuu
for the storyyyy
commennnnttt. xD

i might just simply write it in past tense, though... something like "his body went limp with fear only by the thought of what might have happened with Annabell if he had not been able to save her. Even though a month had passed he could clarely remember how the and dread had been fighting inside him when he was galopping throught that horrible storm. The rains had been slippery and wet, and the horse had constantly stumbled, threatening to send them both into an early death. But Nathaniel could not for his bare life make himself slow down..." Dumdum dum! .. and so on, and so on...You think?

No, I dont know yet.. i think i might use a flashback, but nothing it written in stone:)

AHhh! This is the third time im writing this message, but my laptop is seriously fucked up... sorry the language... but im really frustrated right now!... i dont even know if you'll be able to read this...
Basicly.., what i wanted to write was that I really apreciate that you're being honest. I feel like that is what i really need now, because i have had so much problems writing the last couple of chapters. In the next chapter i was thinking that i'd let annabell and nathaniel be together and add some more feelings to the whole thing, and then try to describe what happened to Nathaniel before he saved Annabell.. what do you think?

sorry dude, I got banned from writing stories for a month, I have no idea how, it may be because I posted a chapter to let people know that the story was up, but anyway, I can't update for a month >: (

I'm trying to tell as many readers as poss: I've been banned for the time being (along with loads of others) from posting stories, but I'm still able to update my account on jbfanfic, username:chips92. a few new chapters of moving on up have already been uploaded.

haha, im writing while watching televition.. never a good combination:) But you get the message, right?

Thanks for your advices, but i have had realy problems with the last chapters. I'm suffering from a mayor writers block, so i'm just hoping some kind of inspiration will dawn upon me:P Have you recently discovered my story or have you been reading for a while? Sorry if im being over curious, but im just... curious:P Im really in need for some constructive critisism right now.. And you're a good at feedback:)
How are you?

Hi! Thank you so much for the comment for my story! It really means a lot for me when the readers takes the time to write a message after finishing a chapter:) What do you think of the story all-in-all? Is the plot confusing? Do you think I should write a couple of more chapters, or just finish of smoothly with an epilogue now?

Dina:) aka CaptainSolo

Thank you! I'm glad it wasn't too obvious that it was actually Edmund. :] Thank you for reading and commenting!

Yeah. I really wanted to post a story today, but now I can't until they can lett us. Ya, I can't read the stories either!

lol ,why? I'm always in the mood to write a story or a new chapter for my story. But I can't today, because they're like doing technical stuff on the stories page or something. I don't know. lol. =p

LOL. Cool. I'm just really bored, I've been writing all this random stuff and updating my stories

thanks for the comment :) and yes, my story it awesome, thank you XD