lol, wow, i read that a long time ago. i didnt even remember what you were talking about. i had to go back and read it again. i remembered it once i started. it defenatly gets a nine! i would say ten, but only if you made it into an actual story with chapters, i wish it was longer, to where you got to know all the characters better :) great job though, honestly
March 7th, 2009 at 11:58pm