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Personally, I loved Memories Remain. It could use a bit of revision, which I'm sure you agree with, but I loved the idea. It's great, but I can't help but think that it has a striking resemblance to Can't Let You Go. I've had the very same problem. A lot of my stories had begun to look and sound the same, and I just couldn't help it. I figured it out, though, and you will, too. You'll start to notice how some ideas are oddly similar to others, but it's okay. I really, really like Memories Remain, and I think you should keep it, just try a bit of editing. As far as Can't Let You Go is concerned, maybe you should think of a slightly different idea. I can see the differences between the two stories, but I can also see the similarities, and I think that if you gave them a second glance that you would, too, so just think about a different idea for Can't Let You Go, like I said, and just do some editing on Memories Remain. That's all. Nothing major, right?
Yeah. Fucking. Right.
Anyway, I don't think that you should change the title, yet I do think that you should. If you're going to kill Gavin off or throw him in prison, then you should definitely change the title, because he'll be gone for good, but if you plan to bring him back, to keep him haunting Caylee and trying to ruin hers and Brian's relationship, then keep it. It's all up to you.
I like the idea for the next chapter, though. I think Gavin should definitely make his move, and I want to see how Brian reacts, although I'm pretty sure that I have a good idea of exactly how it's going to play out.

I do, too, because I'm totally anticipating that update.
I just can't wait! I think it's gonna be great once you do figure it all out.
I've been thinking about that Brian story I told you about where he and the main character are best friends, and they're both in relationships. It's gonna be pretty good, I think. I'm not sure where I'll go with it after they finally do end up in a relationship, but I guess I'll figure it out when I get there.
I've also been thinking about Nothing Personal. Well, the sequel, anyway. I was thinking that I would take it slow, that I'd start with the first semester of college starting in August and slowly - VERY SLOWLY - ease into Jimmy's death in December. By then, Brian and Kelsey should be in a stable relationship again.

You should, 'cause I'll haunt your dreams if you don't.
Oh, and my dad had a Guard drill this weekend, which is why he never called about seeing the movie, so he asked me if we wanted to see Alice in Wonderland again on Saturday. He said we'd go out to eat and everything. I was thinking that we could eat at El Acapulco, then we'd see the movie in 3D.
What do you think?

Off the subject of food, my mom and Lindsey are watching Coyote Ugly, and I had an epiphany. In our joint story, I thought that Axel could work at Coyote Ugly in Las Vegas at the New York - New York Hotel & Casino instead of being a stripper. She'd be a bartender, and she'd dance on the bar, but it's a little more classy than being a stripper, which is what I was going for. She's pretty hardcore, and I thought that suited her better.
I also had other ideas for her. When she isn't working as a bartender, she works in her dad's garage. Since he's retired from being a professional poker player, he finally fulfilled his dream of owning a garage and becoming a mechanic, and throughout his entire life, he's taught Axel (and Ace, if you'd like) the tricks of the trade in mechanics, so she usually spends her weekends there, and she takes Brian there when he decides to actually take the time to get to know her.
Also, she's an avid gun collector, as Brian is, and when she's not at the bar or at the garage, she's out target practicing, which she also does with Brian (Ace can, too).
Oh, and by the way, you should definitely post an update to Monster, and I better see some evidence of some work done on Can't Let You Go, got it?
Good.

Thonk yu.
That's exactly what I wanted to know.
Brian and Zach are so pathetic. They just need to get a fucking life.
Ugh. Men. So typical.
You should, dude. We could go through pain together.
I'm actually about to some grilled chicken doused in strawberry seasoning with cheddar and broccoli rice, which I made all by myself. It's gonna be uhmazing.
=)

You. Dirty. Whore.
You stole all of my pictures from my Photobucket! And coincidentally, I stole all of those pictures from someone else! What's wrong with us?!
Anyway, I was told to ask you how much it costs for you to get your hair cut and how much, if they do this, does it cost to have a lip and eyebrow waxing done. Also, I'm almost certain, definitely for sure, absolutely positive that I'm going to have my ears pierced for the second and third time on Saturday, so I want you to be with me, chica, 'cause I luh you.
Oh, and before I forget, I was texting Zach earlier, and he went total roid rage, douche bag on me, because I told him that I'd been with you all weekend. Honestly, I think he's insanely jealous, because well, that's just Zach, but Brian was pretty jealous, too. They should just go be jealous, egotistical assholes together, I think.
What do you think?
That's what I thought.
What did you just say to me?
Slut. Yeah. I'm talking to you.
;D

Whatevs.
Believe what you want to.

Hello?
It's obvious. Brian is way hotter than Zach, so our sex life is way hotter than yours.
=)

I love you so fucking much.
I'm so glad that we're best friends, because you know what?
I'd die without you.
By the way, I was texting Zach, and he gave me all of the nitty gritty details about what you guys did the other night. It was pretty fucking disgusting, and not only was I offended, but so was Brian.
See what you did? He's totally puking now.
Damn.
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haha so what did you do afterwards?

I smell hot sex. That's what I smell, dammit.
It's gonna be good, and so is Heroin, No Life, and Aftermath. Ha! I already have acronyms for them. I'm insane, but I can't stop writing Heroin, yet I want it to end so badly. What the fuck is wrong with me?
Jesus Christ.
I'm pathetic.

im not sure I think its his old one,but I'll send ya in a message what his address his

yellowpages

im not a stalker though,and if it were him,I have no way there,and Im not that mean

OMFG!I think I found matt shadows address!

No problem :]

you'll know; i'll link them in one of gravity's an.

VD is Matthew.
and R is about Zachary.

uhm...
VD is still in the works and I'm doing last minute changes to the story line and i haven't written the chapters yet.

R is going pretty good so far, i'll probably post it in a few days or a week.
Maybe during my spring break.
(:

no way thats too badass!
that movie pwns any other movie