Thanks for reading and taking the time to leave a comment. I'm glad you think it gets more interesting as the story progresses. The next chapter is already started, so I'll try and write as fast as I can.
Most people have been voting twice, so i see no problem with it, Thanks for voting though!!! It's def. making the choice that much easier!! I'm so glad you enjoyed the chapter along with the small detail of Ville winking at Aida, i love it when people love those small things! I'm also glad you enjoyed the length, i knew if anyone appreciate that it would be you! :P Thank you for the comment! And i'm hoping the next chapter will be up soon!! -Kassandra
I think this last chapter hit 23 pages lol. Wanted to make a long one to make up for the lack of chapters :p So glad you enjoyed the chapter!!!!! It was a blast to write!! As for the idea for the tat. I'm really not sure, i just really liked the idea of them getting matching tattoo's without them actually matching, and i love Ville's tattoo of Poe's eyes on his back and i wanted to do something with it. and it just went from there.
I'm all done with it's extended scene and it's all posted it you want to check it out!! Thank you so much for the comment!! And next chapter hopefully up soon!!!
Thank you so so much for the comment on chapter 110!! I'm so glad you enjoyed the chapter. I have to ay that you are one author i greatly admire, and I'm honored that I'm one of yours *blush* I have in face found time to write, and chapter 111 is done, so it'll be posted tomorrow for you guys!!!
Thanks for leaving a comment. You have been with me for most of this story, so it means a lot that you're still reading it. I'll try to update quicker, but its hard with life.
I'll see what I can do. I only update after my friend updates this Paul Wesley story for me - it's a trade off kind of thing haha. So as soon as she updates, I will. You can go put pressure on her if you want haha. The story is called The Sweet life.
Haha it's not meant to be true love! Just an attractive person that you can't stop talking to who makes you really happy, that kind of vibe.
Well the story doesn't really have a vision. It was an attempt to fix writer's block and to get some feedback on my writing and to not write about Avenged Sevenfold for once lol so especially for this story, I feel like it is super important to listen to the feedback and work on it.
Thanks for the comment. I've just tried to convey the physical attraction of them and the instant spark they have together, but I guess it's a bit too much at the moment? Without that, I sort of feel like there's no reason why they should bother with each other, you know?
Hey thanks for getting back to me :D Fair enough, about reading it first and everything. I would say that I'd advertise your story in my author's note, but I doubt that anyone reading my story hasn't read yours already lol.
Thanks for pointing out the positives, and also the negative about him being a bit too nervous. I have tried to make him overly nervous, as if he just already knows she's something special and that he can't muck it up, sort of instinct, in a way, I guess. I don't really know if that makes any sense for you lol. I just want him to be a different rock star, so he's worth her attention, you know? Not the whole typically cocky image, but a sweeter one. Does it sort of seem justified now? Perhaps I'm not conveying that well enough... Anything else you'd like to add to that? I'm all about constructive criticism and feedback :)
Thanks for the support :)
Hey :) I was wondering if you could do me a favour? I've started a Jyrki story but only have one reader and I was wanting a bit more feedback than that. So, if possible, when you next update, could you post a link in the author's note to my story? If not, that's fine, I won't be offended or anything. I was just wondering :) Thanks
Thank you so much for the comment! I truly appreciate it. And, I have a horrid memory so I definitely understand the forgetful comment. All good. Thanks again!
Erin
The ending I have written 39480398424 times. I just didn't want to be TOO cliche. And perhaps spark some comments from my readers to make me write and be more creative.
I like your ideas. I have something started... barely a page or so... I might do an epilogue. Or a 5 chapter finisher.
I am hopelessly retarded in love with the man of my dreams so I get where you are coming from. :)
It's my pleasure, I'm just sorry that the comment was so long!
And I just need to say, that I really didn't mean to cause offence by saying it was 'simple'. I didn't mean it in a derogatory manner, as you put, sometimes the most simple things are the most beautiful. It was just my opinion. I also liked the fact that he had fucked up in their relationship. How many stories have you read where the couple fall in love say, chapter five, and then live happily ever after for a very boring twenty chapters?
What a load of bollocks.
And I'm on chapter 25 of Misconnected at the moment, and I love it. Are there any more chapters? I seem to remember reading it a while back and it stopping at them getting drunkenly married. :D
Again, sorry for the long, boring comments. And I'm not usually this formal, ha. I suppose that I'm just in a posh and chatty mood. :3
The tattoo scene should be next, it was the runner up, so i should get working on that one soon lol. Young Soya was fun to right, and she was very sheltered as a teen, so i'm glad that came across. As for a chapter of yours as a b-day present, best i could ask for XD Next chapter will probally be up later tongiht before i go out(i turn 21 at midnight so my friends are taking me out lol)
Aww well I'm glad I could make your evening, haha!
I've had such horrendous (now that I think about it, I'm not sure if that's the way you spell it haha) writers block the last...few months actually, I'm pretty sure that I've lost most of my readers haha. So thank you for taking a moment to read it <333