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  • folk you please

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    :D Thanks for reading Little White Liar.
    I was actually really worried about readers, considering it's OF and OF hardly gets read.
    But thank you, and I promise that it'll be good.
    July 17th, 2008 at 06:45pm
  • Ashlee Simpson

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    Oh no me too I hate that! I try and comment and say something nice, it gets frustrating otherwise.
    It gets annoying living in three places, heck of a lot of flying :D I live pretty much near Dubai, an hour on the plane. Admittedly dubai is hella exciting but not nice to live there all the time. I hope you have fun! At least til will be dry and sunny there!
    xx
    July 17th, 2008 at 02:26pm
  • Ashlee Simpson

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    Thank you so much for the story comment! I'm glad you like it so far!
    xxx
    July 17th, 2008 at 01:27pm
  • lightscomingout

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    so i totally just noticed you have a new update. i loved it. :-) it was really good.
    and i looooove belle and sebastian. theyre awesome
    July 16th, 2008 at 06:21am
  • lightscomingout

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    yummm. i love tres leches.
    i dont like to make a big deal out of birthdays either. at least not mine.
    i hope its been really amazing though!!
    soo, hows the new chapter going?
    July 16th, 2008 at 06:09am
  • lightscomingout

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    HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!
    yayy. i love birthdays.
    what are you doing?
    July 16th, 2008 at 01:54am
  • lightscomingout

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    haha thats awesome! i hope you have an awesome birthday whenever that is. (when is it?)
    and yeah, i noticed that there are a hellofalotof fans on here
    July 15th, 2008 at 09:21pm
  • lightscomingout

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    im baaaack!!!!!
    :-))))
    france was totally amazing. i officially decided im moving to Paris. hehe, i already picked out my apartment. hahah..
    your going to dubai?! that sounds really awesome! what are you gonna do?
    uhhmm, im not really into My Chemical Romance. i like some of their songs, but im not like hard core into them.
    Go Chapter 5!! Wooooh!!
    July 15th, 2008 at 09:04am
  • xxlipslikemorphinexx

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    okay thank you =]
    July 8th, 2008 at 07:28pm
  • lightscomingout

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    im actually in france right now! hah. didnt i tell you?
    where are you going?
    and i have no idea how to get more readers. uh, probably update more, make more friends, comment alot, post random stuff (good random stuff)... idk.
    i have no idea where i got the few readers i have. i think people just like to check out random people and their stories. i think the key is to have alot of updates (even though i dont have like any, hah)
    July 6th, 2008 at 04:29pm
  • lightscomingout

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    thanks! hah.
    i didnt think i would be getting any internet here, but i think that sometimes i will. so if you wanna talk, i think ill be able to. = )
    July 2nd, 2008 at 03:37pm
  • I Am Death

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    Thanks so much for the help you gave me by doing that survey :)
    Means soooo much :D
    July 1st, 2008 at 10:18am
  • lightscomingout

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    Oh mann! I loved the new chapter! It was soo good! I loved how you added about how cliche it was. That was a great addition.
    The only part that was iffy for me is how everyone reacted to Parker walking in. But otherwise, I totally applaud you for it! :-)
    June 29th, 2008 at 12:33am
  • lightscomingout

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    Thank you! No, I found it.
    I looked for a really long time for the right kind of background. I have a complex to make visual effects and pictures and whatnot important to me. Well, I saw it, and thought it was totally perfect. Im going to have Saturn Bar for gigs and having fun and stuff and I thought the shoes would probably be perfect for Isabelle. :-)
    And no. One sided main characters are no fun. And its fine to have some cliche based ideas. Theyre hard to avoid. But I bet you'll play it off nicely.
    June 28th, 2008 at 11:07am
  • lightscomingout

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    That sounds really good.
    Stay away from pesky cliches! I think I mightve struggled on that for my last update. Theyre just soo sneakyy.
    And I think you should add more depth to Parker. He seems like a good kid. I want to know more about him. :-)
    I cant wait for the new chapter.
    June 28th, 2008 at 10:51am
  • lightscomingout

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    Thats good! Keep at it! It'll be great!
    Don't end it until you're completely satisfied!
    June 28th, 2008 at 10:34am
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    I dont know why I do that. I tend to make really short statements when Im speaking for Max. It might just be a character thing. Idk. Its sooo weird. Like I dont even know what Im writing until its there.
    And I think I re-did that. When I was on Quizilla, I would write it and then keep it for like dayys just rereading and rewriting stuff. But here, I get kind of impatient. hah.
    Hows the writing going?
    June 28th, 2008 at 10:22am
  • lightscomingout

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    Yeah, I do. You should do my inspiration thing. Idk if you could add more people and more sub-plots. Thats what I do. Like maybe with one of the foster siblings, have something to do with them. Just an idea.
    Okay, Im officially obsessing about the typo thing. I cant find it.
    And I changed a bit too. (I was in kind of a hurry this morning) I changed the cashiers name to Moira. Tiffany is too cliche of a name for a blonde cashier.
    June 28th, 2008 at 10:01am
  • lightscomingout

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    haha. thats totally where I got the inspiration. But I mean seriously, how else would you picture a manager at a Safemart or whatever?
    June 28th, 2008 at 09:38am
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    Okay cool! I cant wait to hear about it!
    I went to DC for a while. It was sooo fun.
    Im probably gonna post again soon. I just want it to be really good and not rushed or anything.
    June 25th, 2008 at 04:09pm