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im baack. (i was on vacation so dont think i abandoned you)
i liked the update alot. it showed alot of parker. but dont show too much too early in the story. leave some mystery. ;-)
please update soooon

I just read your story, and I think it is reallly good! It is really well written and I like how you are telling about the specific night in segments. It is scary and intriguing, makes me want to learn more about what happened, who her attacker is, and so on. I also like Parker, he seems nice, but just dont make him too nice if you know what I mean. He still needs to be realistic.
:-)
A constructive critism is to not fall into the cliche of popular vs. outcasts. It is hard to stay away from cliches, but you need to try to be a million miles from them. They can ruin a good story.
Alrighty then. Please update soon!

haha omg i knooow. it is so good. i love all her stories.

Yay! Same to you!
Haha, I took a chance and tried to add a couple of new people like you did. lol I feel like succh a nerd.
Oh, you should definitely read Maesaysdance's stories. Shes like the funniest person ever.

i was curious. someone who hadn't read harry potter? haha. well, i am kinda a fanfic person. and in a lotta ways im not. but i have soo many ideas for the Marauders though. its mostly just that i can do so much with what they went through, the fun beginning, going through Hogwarts, the rise of Voldy, the first war, the betrayal, the sadness, and then if they happen to survive through it all, the defeat of Voldy, the rise of Voldy again, the Second war, and so on... I have a lot of ideas for it all.
so i would be your beta if you would be mine (i recently just learned this word), someone who reads anothers story and edits and gives advice and helps along the way. :-)

hahaahhh! Sorry that Im laughing, its a Harry Potter thing. lol. I am succh a HP nerd. The Marauders is a group of four mischievous boys who went to Hogwarts in the 1970s. They were James Potter (Harry's dad) and his friends. lol. I was so in love with the whole thing that I started drifting off and thinking about what it would be like to be friends with them.Then I started thinking of a storyline, but then the characters all changed on me and now it is its own story. I will still read yours and stuff but I guess you cant help with that one. No matter, I started writing a separate non fanfiction called Polaroid Pictures, and I need real help with that one. I barely started even thinking about it and Im already writing! gah! normally I spend like a year thinking about it before I put anything down. lol.

oh, hey! youre from Quizilla too! hah. im so in hate with new Quizilla. its terrible

well I think it sounds good. it sounds sad but still really interesting. Mine is pretty much just a Marauders Fanfiction, but it has become soo epic in my mind.
It is just about thi girl's life as a witch from the Marauders Era on. Its going to get realllly long.

Oh same here with me. There is a lack of interest in others and I definitely need some feedback. I should probably start branching out but when I think about it I get all jittery and shy. haha I'm so lame. ;-)
Ive been writing forever, just random stuff but I started doing this kind of thing for a little more than a year. Thats when I got the idea for my main story and yet Im only on chapter 6. haha.
I would love to read your stories and give feedback. What is it about?

i like to write about anything really...i let my mind flow and whatever comes out i write...i also like to put it into paintings/drawings as well..i can get VERY creative with my pictures

Thanks! Good luck! ;D

Hey. Thanks for the add. :-)
So you're new? Welcome then! but I might be just as new as you, hah.
Whats up?

hey erin! thanks for the welcome!!

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Well if you do disid to post them I'll be sher to read them:)
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