As I briefly mentioned in the author's note, it was written for a literary magazine and it had a word limit. I had reached it. xD I would have loved to give it a more complete ending, and I appreciate your feedback! :)
:) We're glad to hear that you like the story so far! And yes, what we're trying to do is deviate from the norm that Cheerios must be terrible human beings. And I hope Steph will turn out realistic, as well. Thanks so much for taking the time to leave a comment! We really appreciate it.
Hey thanks so much for the story comment :) I feel like it wasn't my strongest piece, but I was trying to incorporate a few different themes into it so it was a bit of a challenge. It also was only the second drabble I have ever written, so I'm still getting used to the short and sweet concept (compared to multi-long chapters, and fan fiction as well) so I'm glad that you liked the short and sweetness of it :) For the imagery, yeah, I get what you mean.... I think that there is better imagery in my first drabble, Vivid Emerald, and that's it a much better piece overall, if you were wanting to read that too :)
I'd definitely read the entries and laugh so much. c:
I remember the old Quizilla, ah, it was glorious.
I mean, besides those people who put too much clutter
and widgets on it. But I really was envious of those people
who knew all the HTML coding and everything.
When they took away customization of story layouts, I was devastated.
I'm excited about the more efficient search engine.
Stories that are categorized incorrectly bother me so much.
& maybe the tutorials, followed by the "blogs."
So glad you go the reference!
I was going to make the steampunk more obvious in the layout, but opted instead for putting it in the 'about me' ;)
Steampunk is an amazing genre/subgenre.
Whoo~ twins!
Hallo Ink :)
I love that we're name twins ;)
Thanks a lot for the comment on 'Te Amo' - I struggle a lot with first person too, so writing it was both a curse and a blessing. I'm glad if it helped you in any way!
Yeah, it was brought to my attention by someone else.
In a sense, it does serve as a guide of what not to do when writing a story.
I'm glad I don't write the same way I used to.
That would be embarrassing and I'm sure that my Sue
would be at the top of the list of Mary Sues of Suedom. x:
(: No problem. I'm glad Quizilla serves as an example of how we
shouldn't be writing by a certain age. I learned many things through the
site and it encouraged me to write and read more. The Mary Sues are
god awful though. Oh boy.