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i actually read a lot of the walking dead fanfiction and it's all kind of the same cliche romance but so far yours is probably the most uniquely different one i've read so far which is why i like it a lot!

yeah and the show is really good and i can understand how it's hard to try and be in the middle of romance and a brutal war but im sure you'll write the story just fine :)

wait asian persuasion wHERE????
IDK I MISSED IT OR SOMETHING?????
but zehn needs to stop ok i can't get over that falsetto uGH STOP ZEHN

weenie hut what omfg
LEMON
YOU CAN'T GO WRONG WITH LEMON OMFG THAT SHIT IS SO TASTY
yes ugh macaron virginity ok ok

YES UGH STOP SRSLY CAN THEY NOT
IT HURTS
IT PHYSICALLY AND EMOTIONALLY HURTS
our ice cream scoops are no match for their grand canyons

it's ok as long as Vanessa dies nothing is wrong and everything is beautiful >OuO<

people only think zombies are overdone because of the walking dead but i think your story is lovely and im so excited to read more tell your sister to swirve ;)
DONT STOP BELIEVINNNNN HOLD ON TO THAT FEEEELIN

i can't do this anymore zayn u kill me
YES DAT FALSETTO DOE
HOLY FUCK
THAT IS SEXY AS UGH
MOLTEN HELL IDK I WAS THINKING ABOUT MOLTEN LAVA CAKE AND THEN HELL JUST CAME OUT
yes omg
and in the behind the scenes for bse he was like "everyone knows i'm a great dancer" or something like that and it's like sTOP RINGHT NOW UGH U DON'T HAVE THAT RIGHT

...................Laudurée macaarons are sex in the form of little cakes u just passed sex up lol sux 4 u
you could've lost your virginity to a macaron
unless you've already lost in then this conversation should be nonexistent \m/
oh my god just ignore that i'm sorry for discussing your v-card

IT'S WEIRD CAUSE THEY'RE QUITE SHALLOW
AND THAT MAKES ME SAD LIKE UGH DEEP DIMPLES HARRY STYLES U STOP RIGHT THERE AND LET ME FILL THOSE DIMPLES WITH WATER AND DRINK OUT OF THEM FUck that was weird
dimples love us period
but dimples love Harry the most /sigh

DEW EHTTTTTTTT
BITCH NEEDA GO
A WRITER'S GOTTA DO WHAT A WRITER'S GOTTA DO YENNO
and rn a writer gotta kill off dat ho

ALWAYS OK SHE IS QUEEN

"it's zen" U STOP THIS RN ZAYN OR ELSE YOU KILL ME
omg he was so perfect at the concert
I nearly cried except not really bc I don't do crying at concertos

YOU NEED TO EXPERIENCE LAUDURÉE MACARONS
THOSE FANCY ASS LIL MOFO MACARONS ARE EXPENSIVE AS SHIT BUT TASTY AS HELL LIKE SWEET BABY JESUS
EMPHASIS ON THE SWEET
YOU GOTTA TRY THE LEMON
AND THE BLACKCURRANT
AND THE SALTED CARAMEL BC THOSE ARE THE BOMB.COM

omg I have two right below my lip
and then I have the family two right beneath my eyes
and then I have one cheek one LOL
YOU ARE A SPECIAL SNOWFLAKE BC YOU DON'T HAVE ONE ON ONE SIDE AND THE OTHER ON THE OTHER

please actually do
please do
do
because that would honestly make the entire story
minus Alex and Leila sexin it up of course bc lbr that's the highlight yenno but
do throw her under the bus
and maybe have her die

yES
MIA HAS SAID IT PERFECTLY
BUT LIKE LANA SAID
IT'S LIKE A RIDE OR DIE

Zayn is just
oh god
I can't do this and like "something something Harry and Zack!"
"it's Zayn" but he said it like "iT'S ZEN" OR SOMETHING OMFg
can we just draw the line at hOT HOT AS A TATER TOT
bringing back some Americanness into this convo bc my French is shitty as a dried glue stick
MMMMMM THOUGH MACARONS ARE THE BOMB.COM

why can't I have perfect angel dimples for fuck's sake
I DO HAVE DIMPLES THOUGH RAISE AND PRAISE
ALTHOUGH SOME ARE A BIT AWKWARD AND LONELY

CAN THAT ACTUALLY HAPPEN
PLEASE

if they don't act fast they gonna lose us

LOL JSHORE WHAT IS UP WITH U
lbr Zayn could be a piece of shit and he'd be beautiful
THAT WAS LITERALLY MY FAVORITE LINE
OH MY GOD IT WAS SO PRECIOUS
LIKE HARRY STOP IT YOU'RE CUTE AS A BUTTON FUCK
LES TRÈS PETIT ET BEAU GATEAUX IDEK IF CAKE IS FEM OR MASC

yes he is omfg damn straIGHT AND I'LL BE SEEING HIM JULY 31ST
ASHTON HAS DIMPLES UM WHAAAAAAt

yes u have ugh you should feel ashamed of yourself

VANESSA NEEDS TO GO
I FEEL GOD AWFUL FOR LEILA OH MY GOODNESS
THIS FRAGILE GIRL HAS LEGIT BEEN BROKEn

awh haha thanks my name is Jimmie so I was like "please please please please please" hahahah

basically
we need our own show
CW where are u
stars were born today (kind of???)
yes ugh story of our lives
THE ALEXERINDA DIARIES.
LET'S MAKE IT HAPPEN.

wait idek Jersey Shore talk so lol me no comprende what Jersey Shore smush is
YES UGH WE NEED THAT CURL
Zayn is so hot as a girl omfg
I mean as a guy too obvi but damn
he makes a fine ass girl
MARCEL THE MARKETING GUY IS TOO DORKY FOR LIFE HE'S SO ADORABLE
*5 delicious and strange baked gODS
GODS OK THEY ARE GODS
NOT EVEN MUFFINS OR GOODS THEY'VE EXCEEDED THAT
I feel u omfg

I JUST FOUND OUT THAT THEY'RE TOURING WITH THIS AUSSIE BAND
5 SECONDS OF SUMMER AND BY GOD
they're 4 delicious and strange baked gods as well oh lordy
Luke Hemmings is to die for
YES THO I FEEL U
like someone in every row taking pictures
but idk that'd be a lot lol maybe two photographers per section idk

I WILL
SOMEDAY LOL IDK WHEN BUT I WILL
RULE #1 OF FIGHT CLUB THOUGH: YOU DON'T TALK ABOUT FIGHT CLUB.
omfg lol that video made no sense to me

can we live in the Carrie Diaries
bc that is exactly what you described so
but literally our life in a nutshell (in no particular order):
1. boys
2. food
3. sleep
4. showbiz bc we'll be u know followin our dreams n shit

I HAVEN'T
BUT I HAVE SEEN ZAYN AS A GIRL OMFG
I WAS LIKE WHAT THE FUCKKKKKKKK
have you seen Harry
I'm about to cry omg they straightened his beautifully lusciously curly locks
I will cut a bitch

YES
I'M GOING WITH MY FRIEND
AND SHE'S COMING BACK ON THE 29
COMING OVER ON THE 30 TO MAKE SHIRTS
AND THEN WE'RE HITTING THE CONCERT ON 31

ok so
Morgan Freeman and Brad Pitt are basically perfect
n their voices n stuff
I HAVEN'T SEEN FIGHT CLUB SHHHH

YOUR DAD
OH MY GOD HE IS MY HERO

yes pls omg we can be boy magnets
and men magnets like ugh this'll be perfect
you are so welcome bc obviously u can't major in a one-woman show u feel???
u gotta follow your dreams and jUST GO WITH IT

OMG
I WAS LISTENING TO THIS SEGMENT OF THIS RADIO INTERVIEW OF THEIRS ON TUMBLR
AND IT WAS HILARIOUS BC NIALL DROPPED HIS TEA AND LOUIS GOT SO MAD
AND HARRY WAS LIKE, "FOR THE BENEFIT OF THE RADIO (OR PUBLIC I'M NOT SURE), NIALL'S JUST DROPPED HIS TEA."
I died it was so funny omfg
I SEE THEM ON THE 31ST
THAT'S LITERALLY 16 DAYS I'M SO EXCITED OMFG
idk ugh Lana needs to stop being so perfect idek
always
SEE
ALWAYS
ALWYAS
ALWAYS
I just spelled always wrong that second time

yes omg
now that I think about it
Morgan Freeman and Brad Pitt
wow
WOW JOINT ROLE

omfg
ok I'm done u have finished me
the ASPCA commercial oh god I'm dying rn
SARAH MCLACHLAN I'M DONE

I'LL PAY TO SEE YOUR SHOW AND I'LL MAKE MY DAD TAKE US TO NEW YORK AGAIN
AND WE'LL ALL WATCH IT SO TECHNICALLY YOU'LL BE GETTING FOUR PURCHASES FROM ME BC DAMN
WE HAVE TO SEE ERIN AND HER TERRIFIED DOG SING
oh my god you'll be bouncing all over the stage with 50 instruments hanging off your body
talk about sexy

YES NINSEY
YES NIALL BC HE'S PRESH
Lana knows
she knew about this story so she wrote Born 2 Die for it in hopes that you'd find it and put the pieces together
LOL HOW'D HARRY POTTER GET IN THERE O IDK?????

Morgan Freeman
you can never forget Morgan Freeman, that perfect man

that's dope basically

I don't think they know what it's like to express your feelings bc otherwise they'd know
EVERYONE HAS FEELINGS
THEY JUST HAVE A CHOICE TO SHOW THEM OR NOT
fuckin' dumbasses pretending like they don't ugh smh
they should be ashamed of themselves

OMFG
I'M CRYING
YOU'RE A ONE WOMAN SHOW
THAT'S IT
YOU'RE A ONE WOMAN SHOW
AND YOUR DOG IS YOUR AUDIENCE OH GOD
I AM SO DONE WITH THIS LIFE
YOU ARE FLAWLESS
WHEN ARE YOU GONNA BE ONE BROADWAY BC U NEED TO BE THERE NOW

ok Ninsey aw that's cute asdhjflkajsdc I just wanna hug that ship
NO OMG
NO DON'T MAKE ME SOB
DON'T MAKE ME SAD
DON'T MAKE ME CRY
SOMETIMES LOVE IS NOT ENOUGH
AND THE ROAD GETS TOUGH I DON'T KNOW WHY
pls excuse my Lana moment she is queen *raise n praise*
BUT WAIT A SEC THOSE LYRICS TOTALLY FIT YOUR STORY THEN HOLY SHIT #REVELATION
so it's bittersweet then
like bittersweet chocolate chip bits

THOSE RUSSIAN BAKERS WERE THE HIGHLIGHT OF THE MOVIE
BRUCE ALMIGHTY IN A NUTSHELL

it really doesn't ugh
now that I think about it your friend has a talent
being able to stick ice cream up her nose omf

YES UGH
WE HAVE FEELINGS OKAY
WE'RE FANGIRLS
WE HAVE A SURPLUS OF FEELINGS
WE TAKE THE FEELINGS OF THOSE WHO FEEL NOTHING AT ALL
ugh sigh they do not understand
the struggle is real

OMFG YOUR POOR DOG
BUT YES PLEASE SERENADE HER WITH BREAKING FREE

omg I like Ninsey that's adorable
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE CAN YOU SAY THAT THERE'S GONNA BE A HAPPY ENDING?!
my life depends on it jsyk

YES UGH
BRUCE IS SUCH A DICK LOL
BUT AT THE END
THE BLOOD DRIVE COOKIE OMF

EW WHAT IF SHE COULDN'T BREATHE THROUGH HER MOUTH LIKE
SHE HAD TO BREATHE THROUGH HER NOSE (like I gotta breathe through my nose, mouth = no bueno)
SHE'D BE INHALING ICE CREAM OH MY GOD THAT'S NASTY

DO THEY NOT UNDERSTAND OMF
NO
YOU KINDA HAVE TO FREAK OUT WHEN THIS SHIT HAPPENS
IT'S A BIG DEAL
IT AFFECTS YOUR EMOTIONS
YOU DIE A LITTLE INSIDE
WHAT KIND OF FRIENDS DO U HAVE CHRIST

omfg Breaking Free was straight up my fav I can't do this
ZEFRON IS TOO FLAWLESS FOR WORDS
FIN

I'M SO GLAD THEY DO
BECAUSE I'M EMOTIONAL AS FUCK BASICALLY
I DO FEEL WHERE U COMIN FROM
omfg I was actually really proud of that HAHAHA
I love sassin characters yenno
I FEEL U
I HAVE A QUOTE JOURNAL GOIN' ON
omfg does Kinsey hurt Niall bc if she does I don't think my poor, failing heart could take that like
Niall's already a sweetie pie ok that's already bad enough for my heart
but if Kinsey's a little fuck to him oh lawdy
no
that's the way the cookie crumbles
did u
did u just quote jim carrey / bruce
o lord i can't do this anymorE JESUS TAKE THE WHEEL
YOU QUOTED BRUCE ALMIGHTY
EXCUSE ME
#PISSING

YES
yes
like goddamn you go niall you go baby
love that girl with your heart if you want to
and yaknow what hopefully shell love you like
it's brilliant
i love it dude
keep up the good work because all the stories are like oh yeah rainbows sunshine one big happy family after meeting the boys and (I won't lie i've done this with my 1d stories lol but still Kinsey is a beast)
no one deserves to be trash talked or judged like they're judging her like goddamn go eat some ice cream, TOMLINSON, eherm,
and i think this is one of those stories where you write so powerfully about a character through another character's eyes so it's just so much feels, know what i mean? yeah, i'm babbling, sorry lol.
I feel like it's just so amazing the way that niall talks about her that if i ever read it from kinsey's perspective the magic would be lost a little, but it would still be crazy beautiful because niall is always beautiful. always.
/sigh
just when i thought that i'd gotten over one direction lol

DAMN
THAT NOSE IS WORKIN WONDERS

YES OKAY FREAK OUT
well of course omf they're VIP tix WHO JOKES ABOUT VIP TICKETS

YES
YOU GOT IT
MAD PROPS 2 U MAD PROPS MAD PROPS
HSM IS PERFECT
IT'S MY CHILDHOOD KIND OF
Zefron omfg can I love him

wait
I just realized
how is that cone standing
it's a point on a wooden flat surface
how is this
what
I mean
oh wait no it's cause the ice cream's up her nose lolz DUH

IT'S OKAY Y'ALL CAN SAVE UP
BUT YOU PROMISED
FREAK OUT OK
PLZ
JUST FREAK OUT
MAYBE FOR 15 MINS

omfg sometimes when I'm watching Step Up I can feel my hips dying to move
and I really wanna pop and lock and jam and break (mad props to u if u can figure out where that's from >OuO<)
but then I'm sitting
and if I did that I'd fall over

"I would totally shove an ice cream cone up my nose"
EVERYONE MUST SEE

IT'LL NEVER BE OKAY
YES OMFG
AND IDK LISTEN TO SOME SAD 1D SONGS

YES DO IT DO IT

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA OMFG
if I had that picture it'd literally be my prof pic for every social networking site I have an account for

IKR LIKE OMG YOU COULD HAVE PUNCHED THAT GUY AND SNUCK IN IDK
OR DROVE THROUGH THE DOORS VIA AUTOMOBILE
PROMISE ME THAT IF YOU DON'T GET THE TIX FOR THE CONTEST
you will freak out the way you should have when you paid a $25 fee for a parking spot
to a concert that was sold out

YOU HAVE TO
ALSO PROMISE ME THAT YOU'LL EVENTUALLY WATCH THE STEP UP SERIES IT'S SOOOOOO GOOD
it makes me wish I was good at dancing LMAO
I say crew now whaddup I got a big cock