yeah i know what you mean i feel like my story is dragging, but i feel that certain things need to happen for the story to work so i ignore my drama addiction and write chapters like the past two which i feel are fillers but important to the story anyways
ha ha ha! me too! he's too rad. i love looking at him in baby form on his new CD. lol!!
oh, and dont rush the mulling process. enjoy the mulling. mulling iz goooood. =) I actually enjoy mulling more than the physical typing out of my ideas. meh. i wish stories could go straight from my brain into the puter with no typing. maybe one day, huh?
Okay let me try to think...If I were to suggest anything I would say....I would like to see.....well i'm assuming that she's going to be fixed, so that's good. magical healing is great. but i wouldn't turn her just yet. (if you have plans to, that is) I'm still waiting to see how he ends up having to take her for his wife. its pretty much obv that's going to happen from the summary. soooo i would like to see some interaction between andree and Thorne. some kind of activity they have to do together that puts him out of his comfort zone. i'd also like to know exactly why he helped her. because i just don't get it yet. I need to know his reasoning. selling her just wasn't enough. he wanted everyone in her village DEAD, so why leave anyone alive? i would like to think that he liked her in a way, but subconsciously, and it might not come out until he admits he has feelings for her, but he should definitely start to realize some clues that these feelings are happening. I'd also like to see how the others relate to her. are there other human women there? will she have to serve now, after she is healed? maybe she can make a human servant female friend who will tell her why thorne is such a hard man. or maybe they can plot an escape together and get caught, forcing andree and thorne to have interaction when she is brought before him for her crime. lol Does any of this help? Probably insane ramblings. Do you want me to ask my ghetto translator? I got it from Lil Weezy, so that's why it's kinda crazy. lol
writers block? i do not know these words....must be some strange foriegn language. where is my ghetto translator? perhaps it can help me to understand....ah yes, here it is.
*plugs in words 'writer's block'*
*receives translator*
It says that means: "ain't gone be writin yo b1tch a$$ no mo storeh for a minute!"
*gasp*
Oh dear. That's not acceptable. We must get rid of this 'writer's block' business immediately.
lol
Nah I'm just kidding. I dont get writer's block because I have ADD (lucky me, huh?) so my brain will always think of something. The only factor is whether or not I want it to. I sometimes lose interest even when I have ideas and the desire to write. It's just hard work. But my advice for writer's block is to clear your mind, take a short break and don't think about it. Trust that your brain will give you the ideas. It will, when you least expect it. Wait let me ask my ghetto translator what is the cure for writers block...
lol! just kidding. you know eeyore is depressive like a MF! lol I used to hate him as a kid bc he was so persistent at being depressed! lOl now i just find it funny.
You know your other story? I just went to go comment it and say that I felt it was really well-written. But you beat me to it and took it down! *throws Matt Sanders at you* lol! Ouch. That would hurt.
But um, yeah, the only reason why I didn't take to it immediately was because it seemed like a tragedy, and I just can't read tragedies. I get so emotionally involved in stories sometimes it makes me depressed. lol Like I read 2 really good stories without realizing they were tragedies, and boy was I sad at the end. And angry. Because I was sad. In my world, real life makes me sad and fiction makes me happy. Get what I'm sayin? ;) I'm sorry I threw Matt at you. I hope you caught him. lol lol lol