pretty-eyed sarcasm / Comments

Sinceit's your story,you should know what's in every chapter, & what makes them stick out?
or is it what's not there?
Still, it is how the words are put together, in order to make the story float.
Every reader choose in their own way.
This was the chapter that's the best match of my choise.
Unless there was some other confusion?

Welcome :) xxx

if it had been randomly chosen, I guess some do that?
Just that the worst choise deserve aread and a comment just as much as the next and all the other chapters?
Hmm, maybe ..

That even the 'bad guys' have characters and reasons is something easy to forget, especially when they're not often in the main action of the story. I have a problem with one of my character's who turned into a complete bitch when my back was turned!! So yeah, I really admire you for not falling into that trap!

Absolutely no bother, I'm really glad that it sent me to your story, it really is great!

I try to avoid it as well, but I'm not exactly the best romance writer, I try to steer clear of the whole genre because I end up going all cliché 'No, I love you more' 'Well I love you 5ever' stuff. Maybe not as bad as that, but it's still pretty bad, haha! I have no criticisms so far, I didn't see anything while I was reading through earlier, but if I do, I'll leave a wee comment ^^

Thank you for the comment on my story! The constructive criticism helped a lot! :)

You weren't being a jerk at all. I can not tell you how grateful I am...

Oh my gosh! Thank you so much for catching all the flaws in my writing! And being so specfic! I'm going back to change the mistakes right now!

I haven't gotten completely through all the chapters posted yet but ugh. It's just written so well, which you hardly ever find on this website seriously. :D
and thanks I really so much appreciate it. that story only has one chapter left that I need to type up and i'm so sad because I just love it so much D:

be right back while weep in the corner because your lovely comment. [':

all the way, True fans will always wait on the ones they follow though :D

Lol, I wonder why they won't let us edit it. :/

You've already have had your first sunburn? I remember when I was eleven years old and I had a REALLY bad sunburn. I couldn't even take a shower in cold water! It hurt so much. T_T

Lol, I'm in a fantastic mooo. :P Just kidding. ^.^ The weather's nice here, too. It was really sunny, but it's sun down now. :/

Hey! :) I'm good, thanks. How have you been? :D

probably something like that. sounds familiar now haha.
im ok. a bit on the tired side but whatever. thats life right? what about yourself?

ill be honest. i have no idea what were talking about

You are absolutely welcome! :)

i'm moving to new york from missouri c:

just moving. i really do hope it's fun

Yeah I didn't want to get banned :)) Thanks again!