@ pretty-eyed sarcasm It's fine!! And thank you for the feedback!! I have his humorous side, it's just.. going to come out more when he's with George and not in the letters... if that makes sense.
@ GoodGirl; You're welcome! I totally understand that, and showing another side of him is perfect, especially in love letters in the middle of a war, but don't let his humor slip away--it's a huge part of what people love about him! Thanks for actually replying to my nit-picking! :)
About the seriousness.. I.. just.. kinda wanted to have Fred's seriousness show through a bit in the letters.. just kind of a tender, romantic thing.. ya know? BUt THANK YOU
Not a problem at all :) I really enjoyed it! And I think you do a very good job of that honestly, you truly truly do!
Also, I want to thank you for the comment you left on my story! It made me smile I must say. Thanks for bringing up that little error that I made. I'm really glad that you enjoyed it honestly! Thanks for calling it interesting!
I like your username. I'll try to remember the past tense.Which lists are also difficult to follow? *&%$#@! is just a divider- "^" doesn't seem to register in the system for some odd reason. It worked fine with the Old Mibba, which I miss dearly.
Thank you for your comment on The Protection of a God. I appreciate your tip on reading my sentances out loud. I'll try that out. I'm a little pissed at myself for the names too. I just started writing and got so excited adn just posted it. I wanted to change the names, but it's too late now
ahh, thank you so much for the comment on east avenue! definitely helpful so i appreciate it. i like the idea about adding a summary, and i'll take another look at that first sentence. mostly it's on hiatus because lately i've been having a hard time writing anything in general (which is why my other stories are as well) so i decided to do the whole "comment swap" shit on it to get advice that could maybe help me get back into it. and also thanks again for the advice you posted on the blog entry, setting a deadline is a fucking great idea.
It's so irritating! I just feel like shouting 'I gave you life, now do as I say!!' But I guess that's how parents feel too... :/ sorry mum, dad! And I guess that thought is more of a silver lining with a huge cloud attached :')
Thank you for the story comment on Amelia :) The thing is; she's not a sex slave. Never has been, never will be. Probably because I can't write sex scenes worth my life and I hate writing stories about sex slaves. Just..cringe o.e But I can see where you got that from, I really need to change the summary...