July 10th, 2012 at 04:38am
pretty-eyed sarcasm / Comments
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Welcome :) xxxJuly 10th, 2012 at 04:16am
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if it had been randomly chosen, I guess some do that?
Just that the worst choise deserve aread and a comment just as much as the next and all the other chapters?
Hmm, maybe ..July 10th, 2012 at 04:01am -
That even the 'bad guys' have characters and reasons is something easy to forget, especially when they're not often in the main action of the story. I have a problem with one of my character's who turned into a complete bitch when my back was turned!! So yeah, I really admire you for not falling into that trap!July 10th, 2012 at 01:45am
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Absolutely no bother, I'm really glad that it sent me to your story, it really is great!
I try to avoid it as well, but I'm not exactly the best romance writer, I try to steer clear of the whole genre because I end up going all cliché 'No, I love you more' 'Well I love you 5ever' stuff. Maybe not as bad as that, but it's still pretty bad, haha! I have no criticisms so far, I didn't see anything while I was reading through earlier, but if I do, I'll leave a wee comment ^^July 9th, 2012 at 11:05pm -
Thank you for the comment on my story! The constructive criticism helped a lot! :)July 9th, 2012 at 09:23pm
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You weren't being a jerk at all. I can not tell you how grateful I am...July 9th, 2012 at 06:04am
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Oh my gosh! Thank you so much for catching all the flaws in my writing! And being so specfic! I'm going back to change the mistakes right now!July 9th, 2012 at 05:45am
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I haven't gotten completely through all the chapters posted yet but ugh. It's just written so well, which you hardly ever find on this website seriously. :D
and thanks I really so much appreciate it. that story only has one chapter left that I need to type up and i'm so sad because I just love it so much D:June 9th, 2012 at 08:13am -
be right back while weep in the corner because your lovely comment. [':June 8th, 2012 at 11:02pm
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all the way, True fans will always wait on the ones they follow though :DJune 2nd, 2012 at 09:05pm
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Lol, I wonder why they won't let us edit it. :/
You've already have had your first sunburn? I remember when I was eleven years old and I had a REALLY bad sunburn. I couldn't even take a shower in cold water! It hurt so much. T_TMay 30th, 2012 at 08:44pm -
Lol, I'm in a fantastic mooo. :P Just kidding. ^.^ The weather's nice here, too. It was really sunny, but it's sun down now. :/May 27th, 2012 at 09:49pm
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Hey! :) I'm good, thanks. How have you been? :DMay 27th, 2012 at 01:31pm
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probably something like that. sounds familiar now haha.
im ok. a bit on the tired side but whatever. thats life right? what about yourself?May 24th, 2012 at 09:22pm -
ill be honest. i have no idea what were talking aboutMay 24th, 2012 at 09:04pm
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You are absolutely welcome! :)May 24th, 2012 at 05:06pm
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i'm moving to new york from missouri c:May 23rd, 2012 at 12:50am
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just moving. i really do hope it's funMay 22nd, 2012 at 09:44pm
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Yeah I didn't want to get banned :)) Thanks again!May 22nd, 2012 at 07:49am
or is it what's not there?
Still, it is how the words are put together, in order to make the story float.
Every reader choose in their own way.
This was the chapter that's the best match of my choise.
Unless there was some other confusion?