I'd say its pretty good, just a few random mistakes. But hey- you're human.
I'll send you an message with corrected stuff to look over. I'm looking forward to new chapters :)
Both, he's a boxer and like 10 years older so he can't really beat them up XD buuut if they see me standing with my brother I don't really think they'll bother me much mor.
Same, Bou was my fave, I even got my hair cut like his, although it doesn't look like it.. My glasses get in the way.
Yuuki is adorable, and Takuya. ^^
Nyappy stuff.