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  • Your.Desi.Girl

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    Yeah, sorry I just disappeared like that - but as I said, work is taking up all my free time... I hope to get something else up soon!
    May 23rd, 2014 at 12:37am
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    Hey, how have you been? Cute
    May 18th, 2014 at 12:39pm
  • Your.Desi.Girl

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    I hate how you're right...

    But yeah, I figured that you would like this one - I know that you've been waiting to find out why he left and such, so I hope that I didn't let you down with this one! She isn't going to forgive him right away, - if anything, she wants to hate him even more for not telling her anything in the first place - but she does leave Neverland and goes back to Storybrook with them all... cue Killian being his annoying, charming self to win her back.

    Yeah, it was the sultan who made a deal with Rumple to kill her mom... remember is the last one how he found out that Amira's mom was in love with her bodyguard, the guy that she had known since childhood? Yeah, he never forgave her for that...

    And I had to give props to Regina. She's one of the reasons I watch the show [besides Hook, of course] and I think that Lana Parilla is stunning. As Amira said in the story about Snow being a man, I honestly think that Ginny Goodwin's "pixie" haircut does nothing for her. She looks like a guy to me, but hey, it's her style...
    March 14th, 2014 at 05:55pm
  • Your.Desi.Girl

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    It's totally not like I woke up the morning I met him and thought, "hmmm, I'm going to find a married man today and flirt with him." My friend finds it so amusing, though, and suggested that maybe he and his wife are swingers. Aha.

    I know that it took forever for me to get that one up, but I've been all over the place with strange hours at work - we're getting into the busy season and have shows from 11 am to 11 pm some nights. But I will try to get more up as soon as I can... I can't say when exactly, nor can I give you an idea as to what's to come [because I have yet to write it!].
    March 7th, 2014 at 03:11am
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    Elsa was a princess before coronation day, and Pocahontas is the daughter of the chief - a princess, too. And Nala... well, she became queen with Simba, so I'm gonna say that counts in my book... the only princess I don't get is Mulan... She married Shang, who was a general, and she was a typical girl from her village.

    And don't worry, things will get better for Amira... eventually... she's just gotta get off the island before she can try to resume a normal life. But things are going to keep getting interesting, don't worry. Up next is some fluff with Amira and Pan, where she sets her plan into motion for helping Bae, and then there's some more fighting between her and Hook.

    I know, right? I watch that Disney Dudez video all the time now because it's so cute!
    February 22nd, 2014 at 03:58pm
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    Don't worry, there will be lots more fun to come. After all, Pan has to have his turn at twisting the knife that's in Killian.

    Up next is when Amira returns to the Lost Boys' camp and Peter and her have a.... heart-to-heart, of sorts.
    February 13th, 2014 at 01:25am
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    Kocoum had always been one of my favorite Disney guys... if I were Pocahontas, I would have married him in a heartbeat... just saying...

    Aha, I look forward to it!
    February 7th, 2014 at 01:15am
  • Your.Desi.Girl

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    Aha, I'm glad that it was enjoyable and entertaining! And if you like Amira's attitude, it's going to get a lot better, I promise. There will be a lot more back and forth between her and Killian, and who knows, I might throw in a jealous Emma for a little fun as well.

    Up next, Amira and Killian are finally going to talk - like actually exchange words with one another rather than Amira just staring at him in shock - and Peter notices that Amira is different after her little encounter with the "good guys."

    And I will totally check out your story! Just let me know when the first chapter is up!
    February 5th, 2014 at 12:51am
  • Your.Desi.Girl

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    She's going to run into Killian in the next one, and once again, it is totally by mistake. But hey, if anything, she won't ready to forgive him anytime soon for what happened all those years ago after seeing him kissing Emma like that.

    And don't worry, Peter will continue to be his deviant little self, putting himself right in the middle of Killian and Amira.
    February 3rd, 2014 at 12:49am
  • Your.Desi.Girl

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    I'm so glad to hear that you liked the first chapter! Killian won't be in the next chapter [unfortunately] but he should be around starting chapter three. Up next, Amira is going to find out that Killian is back in Neverland and will see him from afar.

    So she doesn't exactly backhand him, but she doesn't walk away without making her presence known....

    And don't worry, both Pan and Amira are going to take great pleasure in twisting the knife with Killian.
    January 31st, 2014 at 01:05am
  • Your.Desi.Girl

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    Oh, come on! You knew it was going to happen! They couldn't just live happily ever after like that.

    But I'll get the first post for the sequel up within the next few days. I'm just finishing up chapter three, so once it's good to go, I'll start it.
    January 27th, 2014 at 05:56am
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    Unfortunately, no one will be saying anything to each other that you want them to. Now I just hope you don't hate me after the next chapter.... that's when you get to see everything come crashing down! Killian will end up leaving her, but there is a sequel, so there's no reason to come at me with a switchblade.

    I hope I don't disappoint with it.
    January 24th, 2014 at 01:43am
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    He has to, though! I'm already bending the script so it fits for this; I can't completely disregard the show's storyline like that... even thought I kinda wish I could...

    Bu Amira will see Bae again, don't worry.

    Up next, Bae ends up leaving with the Lost Boys [as per the show] and Amira gets to meet the "King" of Neverland. Then Killian explains why he gave up Bae to Pan. I'll get more up most likely tomorrow!
    January 22nd, 2014 at 12:48am
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    Yeah, more fluff - and I'm glad to know that you approved! And yes, Bae is being very protective of her, but can you blame him? He was told that a pirate killed his mother and that they can't be trusted, etc....

    Up next, he asks Amira for advice when Bae tells him about his dad being the Dark One and how the dagger is the key to killing him, as well as Bae finding the picture of Milah and wanting off the ship [basically what happened in And Straight On 'Til Morning] I'll try to get it up soon, most likely Sunday, since that's my next day off.
    January 16th, 2014 at 09:34pm
  • Your.Desi.Girl

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    Ahahaha! I know exactly what you mean! So glad that you liked the update!
    January 11th, 2014 at 06:33pm
  • Your.Desi.Girl

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    Aha, At least you liked the fluff! Usually those pieces of a story are the annoying parts that don't really matter, but I tried to make it nice, even thought it's not adding much to the plot.

    I'm not going to change much of what happens in the Once storyline with Bae and Hook. He does start getting along with him, then find the picture, gets mad, storms off and gets captured by the Lost Boys... but the add in part is how Amira fits into it all and how she starts to care about Bae like a little brother.

    And I will definitely check out that story!
    January 9th, 2014 at 04:56pm
  • Your.Desi.Girl

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    I know that this isn't what you're going to want to hear, but those hidden feelings won't disappear anytime soon. To be quite honest, I'm thinking of splitting the story in two, wrapping up this part, then continuing it with a sequel.... so any sort of confession wouldn't happen until the sequel, [given that I split it] or just waaaaay later in Suffer.

    Up next, Killian tells her about what happened with his brother the last time he was in Neverland, there's some more cute fluff between them, and then Bae arrives!
    January 7th, 2014 at 03:56am
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    Just wanted to let you know that the prequel to Silence of the Sirens is posted and it's sequel will be posted soon as well! If you want to subscribe at all here are the links!

    A Place to Fly- the prequel
    Thin Skin- the sequel
    December 30th, 2013 at 08:02am
  • Your.Desi.Girl

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    Don't worry, he won't keep her in there forever. Next chapter he's going to tell her about Pan and why he's being so overprotective with her, as well as giving her a little confession... I'll try to get it up in the next few days!
    December 25th, 2013 at 12:28am
  • Your.Desi.Girl

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    I totally know what you mean and agree with everything you had up there.

    Aha, I seriously can't wait for March to get here, but I feel you. There is no way that I can survive that long without seeing Hook's face... thankfully there's YouTube! And I can watch just his scenes from the episodes, which, let's be honest, is the main reason I watch that show to being with.

    He's totally going to win her over... I mean, he has to, right? He's Hook... how do you resist him? He's just so.... hot. Ha.

    And I'm really hoping that they do go back and delve in the Robin Hood story. I wanna see Regina smile. She just gave up Henry and was so completely selfless... the girl needs something good in her life.

    It would be cool if they brought in Jafar, but I think that he's already in that Once Wonderland show with the Red Queen... not too sure if they would do a cross over thing like that, you know? But yeah, Maleficent would have been awesome (she's my other favorite villain besides the Evil Queen), except for the fact that Emma pretty much destroyed any chance of bringing her back.

    The next chapter is Amira exploring the island a little. But they also start fighting because obviously Hook knows the island better than any of them. He wants to keep her safe, she thinks he's being overbearing with his testosterone, etc... going up right now!
    December 21st, 2013 at 07:32pm